Song (Psalm) 84

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Readers’ Version

Literal Version

84:1 Longing to be in Yahweh’s courtyards

The Joy of Worship in the Temple; Longing for God’s House

For the musical director: a song by Korah’s descendants ≈to be accompanied by stringed instrument.[fn]

To the leader: according to The Gittith. Of the Korahites. A Psalm.; For the choir director: A psalm of the descendants of Korah, to be accompanied by a stringed instrument.; For the leader: according to the gittith: for the Korahites: a psalm; For the director of music. According to gittith. Of the Sons of Korah. A psalm.

84 How lovely is the place where you live,

army commander Yahweh.

2 I long to be in Yahweh’s temple courtyards—my desire for them has made me exhausted.

My heart and all of my being call out to the living God.

3 Even the sparrow has found herself a house

≈and the swallow a nest for herself where she may lay her young

near your altars, army commander Yahweh, my King, and my God.

4 Blessed are they who live in your house;

They praise you continually. (Instrumental break.)

5 Blessed is the person who ≈trusts you for their strength—

who ≈thinks about how to travel to Mt. Tsiyyon (Zion).

6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink.