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Song (Psalm) 23

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Readers’ Version

Literal Version

23:1 Protected and blessed by the shepherd

The Lord Our Shepherd; The Divine Shepherd

A song by David.

A psalm: for David; A psalm of David.; A Psalm of David.

23 Yahweh is my shepherd

so I won’t lack anything.

2 He lies me down in paddocks of fresh grass.

He leads me beside a peaceful stream.

3 He refreshes my inner being.

He guides me along paths of obedience so that he’ll be honoured.

4 Even when I walk through a valley in deep darkness,

I won’t be afraid of being harmed.

Your rod and staff will protect and comfort me.

5 You prepare a meal for me while my enemies watch.

You give me olive oil to soothe my head.

≈I have so many blessings.

6 I’m certain that your goodness and your mercy will pursue me for my whole life,

and then I’ll live in Yahweh’s house forever.

23A_song of_Dāvid\f + \fr 23:1 \ft Note: KJB: Ps.

23.

1\f* YHWH shepherd_of_my not I_lack.

2 In/on/at/with_pastures_of fresh_grass lie_down_me at waters_of rest(s) leads_me.

3 Soul_of_my he_restores leads_me in/on/at/with_paths_of righteousness for_the_sake_of his/its_name.

4 Also if/because I_will_go in/on/at/with_valley_of deep_darkness not I_will_fear harm if/because you with_me rod_of_your and_staff_of_your they comfort_me.

5 You_arrange to/for_my_face/front a_table before enemies_of_my you_have_refreshed in/on/at/with my_head my wwww.

6 Surely good and_mercy follow_me all_of the_days_of life_of_my and_dwell in_house_of YHWH for_long_of days.

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