Song (Psalm) 64

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Readers’ Version

Literal Version

64:1 Trusting God for protection

Prayer for Protection from Enemies; A Prayer for Protection

For the musical director: a song by David.

To the leader. A Psalm of David.; For the leader: a psalm: for David; For the choir director: A psalm of David.; For the director of music. A psalm of David.

64 Hear my voice of complaint, God.

Save my from my enemies that I fear.

2 Protect me from the secret plots of wicked people—

≈from the scheming of those who do evil.

3 They have sharpened their tongues like swords.

≈They have targeted their bitter words like aiming arrows

4 to shoot at innocent people from their ambush—

≈they shoot suddenly and don’t fear any consequences.

5 They encourage ≈each other with their wicked plans.

They talk about secretly laying their traps,

≈asking who will ≈notice them.

6 They plot crimes, conceiving the ‘perfect plan’.