Song (Psalm) 63

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Readers’ Version

Literal Version

63:1 Staying close to God

Comfort and Assurance in God’s Presence; Longing for God

A song by David when he was in the Yehudah wilderness.

A psalm: for David (when he was in the wilderness of Judah); A psalm of David. When he was in the Desert of Judah.; A psalm of David, regarding a time when David was in the wilderness of Judah.; A Psalm of David, when he was in the Wilderness of Judah.

63 God, you’re my god. I’m ≈eager to get to know you.

My ≈inner being thirsts for you, and my body ≈needs you

in a dry and ≈depressing land where there’s no water,

2 so I’ve been to the sanctuary to see you—

to see your power and your splendour

3 because your loyal commitment is better than life itself.

My lips will praise you.

4 So I will ≈use my life to bless you.

≈I will lift up my hands ≈to honour you.

5 ≈My mind will be satisfied as if ≈it’s had a good meal.

My mouth will gladly praise you

6 on my bed as I ≈think about you.