OET interlinear YNA (JNA) 2:7

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

בְּ⁠הִתְעַטֵּ֤ף עָלַ⁠י֙ נַפְשִׁ֔⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: when,fainted_away on,me life_of,my DOM YHWH remembered and,it_came to,you prayer_of,my to/towards temple_of your_holiness_of,your )

This phrase could mean that: (1) Jonah was already in the process of dying when he remembered Yahweh. Alternate translation: [when my life was fainting away from me]; (2) Jonah had given up hope of being rescued and resigned himself to the fact that he would die. Alternate translation: [when my spirit inside me had fainted]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

אֶת־יְהוָ֖ה זָכָ֑רְתִּי

DOM YHWH (Some words not found in UHB: when,fainted_away on,me life_of,my DOM YHWH remembered and,it_came to,you prayer_of,my to/towards temple_of your_holiness_of,your )

The implication is that when Jonah remembered Yahweh, he also prayed to him. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [I thought of Yahweh and asked him to help me]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / 123person

אֶת־יְהוָ֖ה זָכָ֑רְתִּי

DOM YHWH (Some words not found in UHB: when,fainted_away on,me life_of,my DOM YHWH remembered and,it_came to,you prayer_of,my to/towards temple_of your_holiness_of,your )

Jonah changes to talking about Yahweh in the third person here and then continues to talk to him in the second person in the rest of the prayer. If this would not be natural in your language, you could use the second-person form here. Alternate translation: [I remembered you, Yahweh]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וַ⁠תָּב֤וֹא אֵלֶ֨י⁠ךָ֙ תְּפִלָּתִ֔⁠י אֶל־הֵיכַ֖ל קָדְשֶֽׁ⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: when,fainted_away on,me life_of,my DOM YHWH remembered and,it_came to,you prayer_of,my to/towards temple_of your_holiness_of,your )

Jonah speaks as if his prayer could travel to God and his temple. This means that God heard his prayer and responded to it. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [then you in your holy temple heard my prayer]