SNG 8:5 Parallel Verse View

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Text critical issues=none Clarity of original=clear Importance=normal (All still tentative.)

Key: khaki:verbs.
Note: Automatic aligning of the OET-RV to the LV is done by some temporary software, hence the OET-RV alignments are incomplete (and may occasionally be wrong).

BrLXX Τίς αὕτη ἡ ἀναβαίνουσα λελευκανθισμένη, ἐπιστηριζομένη ἐπὶ τὸν ἀδελφιδὸν αὐτῆς; Ὑπὸ μῆλον ἐξήγειρά σε· ἐκεῖ ὠδίνησέ σε ἡ μήτηρ σου, ἐκεῖ ὠδίνησέ σε ἡ τεκοῦσά σε.
(Tis hautaʸ haʸ anabainousa leleukanthismenaʸ, epistaʸrizomenaʸ epi ton adelfidon autaʸs; Hupo maʸlon exaʸgeira se; ekei ōdinaʸse se haʸ maʸtaʸr sou, ekei ōdinaʸse se haʸ tekousa se. )

BrTr Who is this that comes up all white, leaning on her kinsman? I raised thee up under an apple-tree; there thy mother brought thee forth; there she that bore thee brought thee forth.

ULT Who is that coming up from the wilderness,
⇔ leaning against her beloved?
⇔ Under the apple tree I awakened you;
⇔ there your mother was in labor with you;
⇔ there she was in labor; she gave birth to you.

UST Look at this woman who is coming up from the wilderness,
⇔ the woman who is leaning on the man she loves!
⇔ I woke you up when you were under the apple tree
⇔ at the place where your mother was in labor with you,
⇔ the place where you were born.

BSB ⇔ Who is this coming up from the wilderness,
⇔ leaning on her beloved?
⇔ I roused you under the apple tree;
⇔ there your mother conceived you;
⇔ there she travailed and brought you forth.

OEB Who is this that comes up from the wilderness,
⇔ Leaning upon her beloved?
⇔ "’Neath the apple-tree yonder I woke thee,
⇔ Just there, where a babe thou wast swaddled–
⇔ Yes, there – by the mother that bore thee."

WEBBE Who is this who comes up from the wilderness,
⇔ leaning on her beloved?
⇔ Under the apple tree I awakened you.
⇔ There your mother conceived you.
⇔ There she was in labour and bore you.

WMBB (Same as above)

NET Who is this coming up from the desert,
⇔ leaning on her beloved?
⇔ Under the apple tree I aroused you;
⇔ there your mother conceived you,
⇔ there she who bore you was in labor of childbirth.

LSV Who [is] this coming from the wilderness,
Hastening herself for her beloved? Under the citron-tree I have awoken you,
There your mother pledged you,
There she [who] bore you gave a pledge.

FBV Who is this coming in from the wilderness holding her love close to her?
¶ I woke you up under the apple tree where your mother conceived you, and where she gave birth to you.[fn]

8:5 What this means is unclear.

T4T ⇔ Who is that woman who is coming up from the desert,
⇔ ◄leaning on/clinging close to► the man who loves her?
⇔ I woke you up when you were under the apple tree
⇔ at the place where your mother conceived you,
⇔ which is the same place where she gave birth to you.

LEB • is this coming up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? • Under the apple tree I awakened you; • there your mother[fn] • there she who was in labor gave birth to you.
¶

8:? Literally “was in labor with you”

BBE Who is this, who comes up from the waste places, resting on her loved one? It was I who made you awake under the apple-tree, where your mother gave you birth; there she was in pain at your birth.

Moff No Moff SNG book available

JPS Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? Under the apple-tree I awakened thee; there thy mother was in travail with thee; there was she in travail and brought thee forth.

ASV ⇔ Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness,
⇔ Leaning upon her beloved?
⇔ Under the apple-tree I awakened thee:
⇔ There thy mother was in travail with thee,
⇔ There was she in travail that brought thee forth.

DRA Who is this that cometh up from the desert, flowing with delights, leaning upon her beloved? Under the apple tree I raised thee up: there thy mother was corrupted, there she was defloured that bore thee.

YLT Who [is] this coming from the wilderness, Hasting herself for her beloved? Under the citron-tree I have waked thee, There did thy mother pledge thee, There she gave a pledge [that] bare thee.

Drby Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness, Leaning upon her beloved? I awoke thee under the apple-tree: There thy mother brought thee forth; There she brought thee forth [that] bore thee.

RV Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? Under the apple tree I awakened thee: there thy mother was in travail with thee, there was she in travail that brought thee forth.

Wbstr Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? I raised thee up under the apple-tree: there thy mother brought thee forth: there she brought thee forth that bore thee.

KJB-1769 Who is this that cometh up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? I raised thee up under the apple tree: there thy mother brought thee forth: there she brought thee forth that bare thee.
(Who is this that cometh/comes up from the wilderness, leaning upon her beloved? I raised thee/you up under the apple tree: there thy/your mother brought thee/you forth: there she brought thee/you forth that bare thee/you. )

KJB-1611 [fn](Who is this that commeth vp from the wildernesse, leaning vpon her beloued?) I raised thee vp vnder the apple tree: there thy mother brought thee forth, there she brought thee forth, that bare thee.
(Modernised spelling is same as from KJB-1769 above, apart from marking of added words (and possibly capitalisation and punctuation and footnotes))

8:5 Chap.3.6

Bshps (What is she this that cometh vp from the wildernesse, and leaneth vpon her loue?) I wake thee vp among the apple trees where thy mother conceaued thee, where thy mother I say brought thee into the worlde.
((What is she this that cometh/comes up from the wilderness, and leaneth upon her loue?) I wake thee/you up among the apple trees where thy/your mother conceived thee/you, where thy/your mother I say brought thee/you into the world.)

Gnva (Who is this that commeth vp out of the wildernesse, leaning vpon her welbeloued?) I raysed thee vp vnder an apple tree: there thy mother conceiued thee: there she coceiued that bare thee.
((Who is this that cometh/comes up out of the wilderness, leaning upon her welbeloued?) I raised thee/you up under an apple tree: there thy/your mother conceived thee/you: there she coceiued that bare thee/you. )

Cvdl What is she this, that cometh vp from the wildernes, and leaneth vpon hir loue? I am the same that waked the vp amonge the aple trees, where thy mother beare ye, where yi mother brought the in to the worlde.
(What is she this, that cometh/comes up from the wildernes, and leaneth upon her loue? I am the same that waked the up among the aple trees, where thy/your mother bear ye/you_all, where yi mother brought the in to the world.)

Wycl Who is this spousesse, that stieth fro desert, and flowith in delices, and restith on hir derlynge? Y reiside thee vndur a pumgranate tre; there thi modir was corrupt, there thi modir was defoulid.
(Who is this spousesse, that stieth from desert, and floweth/flows in delices, and restith on her derlynge? I reiside thee/you under a pumgranate tre; there thy/your mother was corrupt, there thy/your mother was defoulid.)

Luth Wer ist die, die herauffähret von der Wüste und lehnet sich auf ihren Freund? Unter dem Apfelbaum weckte ich dich, da deine Mutter dich geboren hatte, da mit dir gelegen ist, die dich gezeuget hat.
(Who is die, the herauffähret from the/of_the desert and lehnet itself/yourself/themselves on your Freund? Unter to_him Apfelbaum weckte I dich, there your mother you/yourself geboren had, there with you/to_you gelegen is, the you/yourself gezeuget has.)

ClVg Chorus Quæ est ista quæ ascendit de deserto, deliciis affluens, innixa super dilectum suum? Sponsus Sub arbore malo suscitavi te; ibi corrupta est mater tua, ibi violata est genitrix tua.[fn]
(Chorus Quæ it_is ista which went_up about deserto, deliciis affluens, innixa over dilectum suum? Sponsus Under arbore malo suscitavi te; there corrupta it_is mater tua, there violata it_is genitrix your. )

8.5 Quæ est ista? Judæa in tantam sponsi agniti charitatem exardescente, gentilis admirando et congratulando dicit: Quæ est ista? Sub arbore. Gentilibus admirantibus respondet, ille, qui est pax nostra, qui fecit utraque unum: et admonet meminisse gratiæ, per quam ipsa erepta est, et aliorum congaudere saluti. Suscitavi. Quod fuit effectus magnæ benignitatis, quia in illa arbore interius excæcata fuit mater tua, ex quo dixit: Sanguis ejus super nos, et super filios nostros Matth. 27..

8.5 Quæ it_is ista? Yudæa in tantam sponsi agniti charitatem exardescente, gentilis admirando and congratulando he_says: Quæ it_is ista? Under arbore. Gentilibus admirantibus respondet, ille, who it_is pax nostra, who he_did utraque unum: and admonet meminisse gratiæ, through how herself erepta it_is, and aliorum congaudere saluti. Suscitavi. That fuit effectus magnæ benignitatis, because in that arbore interius excæcata fuit mater tua, from quo dixit: Sanguis his over we, and over filios ours Matth. 27..

UTN uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / extrainfo

מִ֣י זֹ֗את עֹלָה֙ מִן־הַ⁠מִּדְבָּ֔ר מִתְרַפֶּ֖קֶת עַל־דּוֹדָ֑⁠הּ

who? this(f) coming_up from/more_than the,wilderness leaning on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in beloved,her

The author does not say who is speaking about the couple here so you should not indicate who you think is speaking explicitly in the text of your translation. However, if you are using section headers to indicate who is speaking, as the UST does, the speakers here are most likely the “daughters of Jerusalem” who spoke several times earlier in the book and who were addressed in the previous verse.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / rquestion

מִ֣י זֹ֗את עֹלָה֙ מִן־הַ⁠מִּדְבָּ֔ר מִתְרַפֶּ֖קֶת עַל־דּוֹדָ֑⁠הּ

who? this(f) coming_up from/more_than the,wilderness leaning on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in beloved,her

The writer is using the question form, Who is that, to create a sense of expectation and interest. If you would not use the question form for this purpose in your language, you could translate these words as a statement or an exclamation.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

עֹלָה֙

coming_up

The writer assumes that his readers understand that the group of people coming up from the wilderness to Jerusalem must travel upward because the wilderness is low in the Jordan valley and Jerusalem is built on hills. You could include this information if it would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: “moving upward” or “arising”

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / go

עֹלָה֙

coming_up

Your language may say “going” rather than coming in a context such as this. Use whichever is more natural. Alternate translation: “going up”

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / extrainfo

תַּ֤חַת הַ⁠תַּפּ֨וּחַ֙ עֽוֹרַרְתִּ֔י⁠ךָ שָׁ֚מָּ⁠ה חִבְּלַ֣תְ⁠ךָ אִמֶּ֔⁠ךָ שָׁ֖מָּ⁠ה חִבְּלָ֥ה יְלָדַֽתְ⁠ךָ & שִׂימֵ֨⁠נִי כַֽ⁠חוֹתָ֜ם עַל־לִבֶּ֗⁠ךָ כַּֽ⁠חוֹתָם֙ עַל־זְרוֹעֶ֔⁠ךָ כִּֽי־עַזָּ֤ה כַ⁠מָּ֨וֶת֙ אַהֲבָ֔ה קָשָׁ֥ה כִ⁠שְׁא֖וֹל קִנְאָ֑ה רְשָׁפֶ֕י⁠הָ רִשְׁפֵּ֕י אֵ֖שׁ שַׁלְהֶ֥בֶתְ יָֽה & מַ֣יִם רַבִּ֗ים לֹ֤א יֽוּכְלוּ֙ לְ⁠כַבּ֣וֹת אֶת־הָֽ⁠אַהֲבָ֔ה וּ⁠נְהָר֖וֹת לֹ֣א יִשְׁטְפ֑וּ⁠הָ אִם־יִתֵּ֨ן אִ֜ישׁ אֶת־כָּל־ה֤וֹן בֵּית⁠וֹ֙ בָּ⁠אַהֲבָ֔ה בּ֖וֹז יָב֥וּזוּ לֽ⁠וֹ

below/instead_of the,apple_tree awakened,you there,at conceived,you mother,your there,at in_labour gave_~_birth,you & (Some words not found in UHB: who? this(f) coming_up from/more_than the,wilderness leaning on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in beloved,her below/instead_of the,apple_tree awakened,you there,at conceived,you mother,your there,at in_labour gave_~_birth,you )

The author does not say who is speaking here so you should not indicate who you think is speaking in the text of your translation. However, if you are using section headers to indicate who is speaking, you can place a header above this section indicating who the speaker is. Here the speaker could be: (1) the woman. (2) The man.

Note 6 topic: translate-unknown

הַ⁠תַּפּ֨וּחַ֙

the,apple_tree

Parallel SNG 8:5