OET interlinear SNG 8:1

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

מִ֤י יִתֶּנְ⁠ךָ֙ כְּ⁠אָ֣ח לִ֔⁠י יוֹנֵ֖ק שְׁדֵ֣י אִמִּ֑⁠י

who? will,he_give_you like,a_brother to=me who_nursed breasts_of my_mother_of,of

Here the woman is using the Hebrew idiom Who will give you to express her wish that the man she loves be like a brother to her (so that she could publicly kiss him). If this phrase does not have that meaning in your language, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [How I wish that you were like a brother to me, who nursed at the breasts of my mother] or [How I desire that you were like a brother to me, who nursed at the breasts of my mother]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

מִ֤י יִתֶּנְ⁠ךָ֙ כְּ⁠אָ֣ח לִ֔⁠י יוֹנֵ֖ק שְׁדֵ֣י אִמִּ֑⁠י

who? will,he_give_you like,a_brother to=me who_nursed breasts_of my_mother_of,of

The woman is referring implicitly to cultural norms which prohibited a display of public affection toward a spouse and/or a romantic partner but allowed siblings to show affection in public. If it would be helpful in your language, you could include this information in a footnote.

Note 3 topic: writing-poetry

מִ֤י יִתֶּנְ⁠ךָ֙ כְּ⁠אָ֣ח לִ֔⁠י יוֹנֵ֖ק שְׁדֵ֣י אִמִּ֑⁠י

who? will,he_give_you like,a_brother to=me who_nursed breasts_of my_mother_of,of

The phrase who nursed at the breasts of my mother describes the word brother and has a similar meaning. This is poetic language. Saying the same thing in slightly different ways is a common feature of Hebrew poetry. If your language has a way to indicate poetry, you could use it here. Alternate translation: [Who will give you like a brother to me]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

גַּ֖ם

also/yet

Here the word Yes is used to strongly affirm what follows it in this sentence. Use a natural form that would communicate that meaning in your language.

Note 5 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

לֹא־יָב֥וּזוּ לִֽ⁠י

not despise to=me

The woman is saying that if the man she loved were like a brother and she found him outside and kissed him, the result is that they would not despise me. Use a natural form in your language for expressing a statement like this. Alternate translation: [then they would not despise me]