OET interlinear SNG 8:14

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / extrainfo

בְּרַ֣ח ׀ דּוֹדִ֗⁠י וּֽ⁠דְמֵה־לְ⁠ךָ֤ לִ⁠צְבִי֙ א֚וֹ לְ⁠עֹ֣פֶר הָֽ⁠אַיָּלִ֔ים עַ֖ל הָרֵ֥י בְשָׂמִֽים

make_haste beloved_of,my and,like to/for=yourself(m) to,gazelle or like,young_deer_of the,stags on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in mountains_of spices

The author does not say who is speaking in this verse so you should not indicate who you think is speaking in the text. However, if you are using section headers to indicate who is speaking, you could place a header above this section indicating that the woman is speaking.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

בְּרַ֣ח

make_haste

Here the word Flee means “come quickly.” If it would be helpful to your readers, you could include this information. Alternate translation: [Come quickly] or [Hurry]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

דּוֹדִ֗⁠י וּֽ⁠דְמֵה־לְ⁠ךָ֤ לִ⁠צְבִי֙ א֚וֹ לְ⁠עֹ֣פֶר הָֽ⁠אַיָּלִ֔ים

beloved_of,my and,like to/for=yourself(m) to,gazelle or like,young_deer_of the,stags

See how you translated the similar expression, “My beloved is resembling a gazelle or a young stag” in [2:9](../02/09.md).

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

עַ֖ל הָרֵ֥י בְשָׂמִֽים

on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in mountains_of spices

Here the woman is speaking of herself as if she is the mountains of spices and she wants the man she loves to come to her and enjoy her body. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly.