SNG 5:7 Parallel Verse View

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OET (OET-RV) The guards going about in the city found me.
⇔ They beat me and wounded me.
⇔ The guards of the walls took my shawl off me.

Key: khaki:verbs.
Note: Automatic aligning of the OET-RV to the LV is done by some temporary software, hence the OET-RV alignments are incomplete (and may occasionally be wrong).

BrLXX Εὕροσάν με οἱ φύλακες οἱ κυκλοῦντες ἐν τῇ πόλει, ἐπάταξάν με, ἐτραυμάτισάν με· ᾖραν τὸ θέριστρόν μου ἀπʼ ἐμοῦ φύλακες τῶν τειχέων.
(Heurosan me hoi fulakes hoi kuklountes en taʸ polei, epataxan me, etraumatisan me; aʸran to theristron mou apʼ emou fulakes tōn teiⱪeōn. )

BrTr The watchmen that go their rounds in the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers of the walls took away my veil from me.

ULT The guards going about in the city found me.
⇔ They beat me and wounded me;
⇔ they lifted my shawl from me, the guards of the walls.

UST The city watchmen saw me while they were walking around the city.
⇔ They struck me and bruised me
⇔ because they thought I was a prostitute;
⇔ those watchmen who were guarding the city walls took my robe that was on me.

BSB I encountered the watchmen on their rounds of the city. They beat me and bruised me; they took away my cloak those guardians of the walls.
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⇔ 

MSB I encountered the watchmen on their rounds of the city. They beat me and bruised me; they took away my cloak those guardians of the walls.
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⇔ 

OEB The watchmen were tramping the city;
⇔ They met me, they beat me and wounded me.
⇔ Those who kept watch on the walls
⇔ Seized the mantle that I had thrown over me.

WEBBE The watchmen who go about the city found me.
⇔ They beat me.
⇔ They bruised me.
⇔ The keepers of the walls took my cloak away from me.

WMBB (Same as above)

NET The watchmen found me as they made their rounds in the city.
⇔ They beat me, they bruised me;
⇔ they took away my cloak, those watchmen on the walls!

LSV The watchmen who go around the city,
Found me, struck me, wounded me,
Keepers of the walls lifted up my veil from off me.

FBV The watchmen found me as they went through the city. They beat me, they hurt me, and stole my cloak, those watchmen of the walls.

T4T The city watchmen saw me while they were walking around the city.
⇔ They beat me and wounded me
⇔ because they thought I must be a prostitute;
⇔ those men who were guarding the city walls took my robe.

LEB No LEB SNG book available

BBE The keepers who go about the town overtook me; they gave me blows and wounds; the keepers of the walls took away my veil from me.

Moff No Moff SNG book available

JPS The watchmen that go about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers of the walls took away my mantle from me.

ASV The watchmen that go about the city found me,
⇔ They smote me, they wounded me;
⇔ The keepers of the walls took away my mantle from me.

DRA The keepers that go about the city found me: they struck me: and wounded me: the keepers of the walls took away my veil from me.

YLT The watchmen who go round about the city, Found me, smote me, wounded me, Keepers of the walls lifted up my veil from off me.

Drby The watchmen that went about the city found me; They smote me, they wounded me; The keepers of the walls took away my veil from me.

RV The watchmen that go about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers of the walls took away my mantle from me.
(The watchmen that go about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers/watchmen of the walls took away my mantle from me. )

SLT They watching going round about in the city, found me; they struck me, they wounded me: they watching the wall took away my veil from me.

Wbstr The watchmen that went about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers of the walls took away my vail from me.

KJB-1769 The watchmen that went about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers of the walls took away my veil from me.
(The watchmen that went about the city found me, they smote me, they wounded me; the keepers/watchmen of the walls took away my veil from me. )

KJB-1611 The watchmen that went about the citie, found me, they smote me, they wounded me, the keepers of the walles tooke away my vaile from me.
(Modernised spelling is same as from KJB-1769 above, apart from punctuation)

Bshps No Bshps SNG book available

Gnva The watchmen that went about the citie, founde me: they smote me and wounded me: the watchmen of the walles tooke away my vaile from me.
(The watchmen that went about the city, found me: they smote me and wounded me: the watchmen of the walls took away my veil from me. )

Cvdl No Cvdl SNG book available

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ClVg Invenerunt me custodes qui circumeunt civitatem; percusserunt me, et vulneraverunt me. Tulerunt pallium meum mihi custodes murorum.[fn]
(They_found me keepers/guards who circumeunt the_city; they_struck me, and vulneraverunt me. Tulerunt cloak mine to_me keepers/guards murorum. )

5.7 Tulerunt pallium. GREG. Pallium tollunt prædicatores, quando, si quid pompæ sæcularis residuum erat, ab anima auferunt, vel, si quod peccatum per ignorantiam inerat, detegunt.

5.7 Tulerunt pallium. GREG. Pallium tollunt beforedicatores, quando, when/but_if what pompæ foreverris residuum was, away the_soul auferunt, vel, when/but_if that sin through ignorantiam inerat, detegunt.

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UTN uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: translate-unknown

מְצָאֻ֧⁠נִי הַ⁠שֹּׁמְרִ֛ים הַ⁠סֹּבְבִ֥ים בָּ⁠עִ֖יר

found,me the,watchmen the,making_~_rounds in/on/at/with,city

See how you translated the sentence The guards going about in the city found me in [3:3](../03/03.md).

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / infostructure

הִכּ֣וּ⁠נִי פְצָע֑וּ⁠נִי נָשְׂא֤וּ אֶת־רְדִידִ⁠י֙ מֵֽ⁠עָלַ֔⁠י שֹׁמְרֵ֖י הַ⁠חֹמֽוֹת

beat,me wounded,me took_away DOM cloak_of,my from,on,me sentinels_of the,walls

If it would be more natural in your language, you could change the order of these phrases. Alternate translation: [The guards of the walls beat me and wounded me; they lifted my shawl from me]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

הִכּ֣וּ⁠נִי פְצָע֑וּ⁠נִי

beat,me wounded,me

The reason that the city watchmen beat and wounded the woman is because they thought she was a prostitute. You could include this information if it would be helpful to your readers.

Note 4 topic: translate-unknown

אֶת־רְדִידִ⁠י֙

DOM cloak_of,my

The word translated as shawl could refer to: (1) a light article of clothing like a robe or cloak that was worn as an outer garment and wrapped around the body. Alternate translation: [my cloak] (2) a large veil. Alternate translation: [my veil]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

שֹׁמְרֵ֖י הַ⁠חֹמֽוֹת

sentinels_of the,walls

The men called the guards of the walls are the same men as “The guards going about in the city” mentioned earlier in the verse. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could include this information. Alternate translation: [those guards who were going about in the city guarding the walls]

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