OET interlinear EST 5:3

uW Translation Notes:

מַה־לָּ֖⁠ךְ אֶסְתֵּ֣ר הַ⁠מַּלְכָּ֑ה

what? [is]_to,you ʼEştēr the,queen

Alternate translation: [What do you want, Queen Esther?]

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

מַה־לָּ֖⁠ךְ אֶסְתֵּ֣ר הַ⁠מַּלְכָּ֑ה וּ⁠מַה־בַּקָּשָׁתֵ֛⁠ךְ

what? [is]_to,you ʼEştēr the,queen and,what? request_of,[is]_your

These two phrases mean almost the same thing. Ahasuerus says the same thing twice, in slightly different ways, to show that he is very interested in hearing why Esther has come to see him. You do not need to repeat both phrases in your translation if it would be more natural in your language to combine them into one. Alternate translation: [What do you want, Queen Esther?]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / hyperbole

עַד־חֲצִ֥י הַ⁠מַּלְכ֖וּת וְ⁠יִנָּ֥תֵֽן לָֽ⁠ךְ

until half_of of,the_kingdom and,it_will_be_given to/for=you(fs)

This was probably a formal and customary expression in the Persian royal court, meant to show honor to the person making a request of the king and to indicate the king’s willingness to be very generous when answering the request. King Ahasuerus was almost certainly not offering to give Esther half of his kingdom. If it would be helpful in your language, you could express the meaning: “I will give you anything you ask for, no matter how great it is.” Alternate translation: [I will give you what you want, even if you ask me to give you half of my kingdom!]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

וְ⁠יִנָּ֥תֵֽן לָֽ⁠ךְ

and,it_will_be_given to/for=you(fs)

You can say this with an active form, and you can say who will do the action. Alternate translation: [I will give you anything you ask for] or [I will give you what you want]