InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
Zep 1 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V16 V17 V18
OET-LV Will_be_a_day_of fury the_day (the)_that a_day_of distress and_trouble a_day_of devastation and_desolation a_day_of darkness and_gloom a_day_of cloud and_thick_darkness.
OET (OET-RV) That day will be a day of anger,
⇔ a day of distress and anguish,
⇔ a day of destruction and desolation,
⇔ a day of darkness and gloom,
⇔ a day of cloud and thick darkness,
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
הַיּ֣וֹם הַה֑וּא
the=day (the)=that
If you have been translating the phrase “the day of Yahweh” with an expression that uses the word “time,” you may wish to say “time” rather than day in each of the instances in this verse.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / doublet
י֧וֹם צָרָ֣ה וּמְצוּקָ֗ה י֤וֹם שֹׁאָה֙ וּמְשׁוֹאָ֔ה י֥וֹם חֹ֨שֶׁךְ֙ וַאֲפֵלָ֔ה י֥וֹם עָנָ֖ן וַעֲרָפֶֽל
day trouble and,trouble day (Some words not found in UHB: day severe_anger the=day (the)=that day trouble and,trouble day destruction and,desolation day darkness and,gloom day clouds and,thick_darkness )
In these four cases, Yahweh is using two words with similar meaning together for emphasis. If it would be clearer for your readers, you could express the emphasis with a single phrase. Alternate translation: [a day of great distress, a day of severe destruction, a day of deep darkness, a day of thick cloud]
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor
י֥וֹם חֹ֨שֶׁךְ֙ וַאֲפֵלָ֔ה י֥וֹם עָנָ֖ן וַעֲרָפֶֽל
day day day (Some words not found in UHB: day severe_anger the=day (the)=that day trouble and,trouble day destruction and,desolation day darkness and,gloom day clouds and,thick_darkness )
Yahweh is speaking as if the sky will literally be dark and cloudy at the time when he punishes people for their sins. He means that it will be a time when people experience much trouble and feel great sorrow. If it would be clearer in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [a day of terrible trouble, a day of deep sorrow]
OET-LV Will_be_a_day_of fury the_day (the)_that a_day_of distress and_trouble a_day_of devastation and_desolation a_day_of darkness and_gloom a_day_of cloud and_thick_darkness.
OET (OET-RV) That day will be a day of anger,
⇔ a day of distress and anguish,
⇔ a day of destruction and desolation,
⇔ a day of darkness and gloom,
⇔ a day of cloud and thick darkness,
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.