OET interlinear SNG 1:6

uW Translation Notes:

אַל־תִּרְא֨וּ⁠נִי֙ שֶׁ⁠אֲנִ֣י שְׁחַרְחֹ֔רֶת

not stare,me because,I dark

The phrase Do not look at me could mean: (1) the woman does not want people to look at her with contempt. Alternate translation: [Do not look at me with contempt, that I am black] or [Do not look at me disapprovingly, that I am black] (2) the woman does not want people to stare at her in admiration of her beauty. Alternate translation: [Do not stare at my beauty, that I am black]

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

שֶׁ⁠אֲנִ֣י

because,I

The word that indicates that what follows is a reason for what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a reason for what came before. Alternate translation: [because I]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

שֶׁ⁠אֲנִ֣י שְׁחַרְחֹ֔רֶת

because,I dark

Solomon assumes that his readers will understand that here, I am black means “my skin is black” or “my skin is very dark,” as it did in [1:5](../01/05.md). If it would be helpful to your readers, you could include this information. Alternate translation: [that my skin is black] or [that my skin is very dark]

Note 3 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

שֶׁ⁠שֱּׁזָפַ֖תְ⁠נִי הַ⁠שָּׁ֑מֶשׁ

because,gazed_on,me the,sun

The word that indicates that what follows is a reason for what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a reason for what came before. Alternate translation: [because the sun scorched me]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

שֶׁ⁠שֱּׁזָפַ֖תְ⁠נִי הַ⁠שָּׁ֑מֶשׁ

because,gazed_on,me the,sun

The author assumes that his readers will understand that the sun scorched me means “the sun made my skin color turn very dark.” You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [that the sun darkened my skin]

נֹטֵרָ֣ה אֶת־הַ⁠כְּרָמִ֔ים כַּרְמִ֥⁠י שֶׁ⁠לִּ֖⁠י לֹ֥א נָטָֽרְתִּי

keeper DOM the,vineyards vineyard_of,my_own that,to,me not kept

Alternate translation: [as caretaker of the vineyards— I have not taken care of my own vineyard]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

כַּרְמִ֥⁠י שֶׁ⁠לִּ֖⁠י לֹ֥א נָטָֽרְתִּי

vineyard_of,my_own that,to,me not kept

The woman is probably using the phrase my vineyard to refer to her skin. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [my skin I have not protected from the sun] or [I have not protected my complexion from the sun]