OET interlinear SNG 4:8

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

אִתִּ֤⁠י מִ⁠לְּבָנוֹן֙ כַּלָּ֔ה אִתִּ֖⁠י מִ⁠לְּבָנ֣וֹן תָּב֑וֹאִי תָּשׁ֣וּרִי ׀ מֵ⁠רֹ֣אשׁ אֲמָנָ֗ה מֵ⁠רֹ֤אשׁ שְׂנִיר֙ וְ⁠חֶרְמ֔וֹן מִ⁠מְּעֹנ֣וֹת אֲרָי֔וֹת מֵֽ⁠הַרְרֵ֖י נְמֵרִֽים

with,me from,Lebanon bride with,me from,Lebanon come descend from,peak_of Amana from,top_of Sənīr and,Hermon from,dens_of lions from,mountains_of leopards

This entire verse is a metaphor. This is poetry and the writer is not literally indicating that the woman is in the mountains and in danger. Rather, he is using this metaphor to express his feelings regarding the distance between them and his strong desire to have her near him. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / go

אִתִּ֤⁠י & תָּב֑וֹאִי

with,me & come

Your language may say “go” rather than come in a context such as this. Use whichever is more natural. Alternate translation: [Go with me … go]

תָּשׁ֣וּרִי

descend

The word translated as Descend here could mean: (1) to come down from a height. Alternate translation: [Climb down] (2) to bend down and look. Alternate translation: [Bend down and look]

Note 3 topic: translate-names

מֵ⁠רֹ֣אשׁ אֲמָנָ֗ה מֵ⁠רֹ֤אשׁ שְׂנִיר֙ וְ⁠חֶרְמ֔וֹן

from,peak_of Amana from,top_of Sənīr and,Hermon

The word Hermon is the name of a mountain range in northern Israel, and Amana and Senir are both the names of mountain peaks.

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

מִ⁠מְּעֹנ֣וֹת אֲרָי֔וֹת מֵֽ⁠הַרְרֵ֖י נְמֵרִֽים

from,dens_of lions from,mountains_of leopards

These two phrases mean very similar things. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. Hebrew poetry was based on this kind of repetition, and it would be good to show this to your readers by including both phrases in your translation rather than combining them. However, if it would be helpful for your readers, you could combine these two phrases into one as modeled by the UST.