OET interlinear SNG 5:11

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

רֹאשׁ֖⁠וֹ כֶּ֣תֶם פָּ֑ז

his/its=head gold_of refined_gold

Here the woman is speaking of the man’s head as if it were gold. Because she speaks of the appearance of the man’s hair in the following line, she probably intends in this line to refer to his face. The phrase refined gold indicates that the gold is very valuable. By saying that the man’s head is gold, refined gold, she is probably indicating that he is special and has great worth. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [His head is like gold that is refined] or [His face is beautiful and gleams like gold. He is precious and valuable like refined gold] or [His face gleams. He is precious and valuable]

Note 2 topic: translate-unknown

שְׁחֹר֖וֹת כָּ⁠עוֹרֵֽב

black as_a,raven

A raven is a large bird with dark black feathers. Ravens are as big as some hawks and are similar in color and appearance to crows but larger. If your readers would not be familiar with this type of bird, you could use the name of a similar bird in your area or you could use a more general term. Alternate translation: [black like a bird with dark black feathers] or [black like a dark black bird]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

קְוּצּוֹתָי⁠ו֙ תַּלְתַּלִּ֔ים שְׁחֹר֖וֹת כָּ⁠עוֹרֵֽב

locks_of,his wavy black as_a,raven

The writer is stating that the color of the man’s hair is dark black like the raven. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state that explicitly. Alternate translation: [his hair is wavy and dark black]