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OET (OET-LV) I_adjure you(pl) Oh_daughters_of Yərūshālam/(Jerusalem) if you(pl)_will_find DOM lover_of_my what will_you(pl)_tell to_him/it (cmp)_am_weak_of love I.
OET (OET-RV) I adjure you, young women of Yerushalem:
⇔ if you find my dearest, what will you tell him?
⇔ Tell him that I’m sick with love.
Scholars differ about the meaning of this section and how it relates to the rest of the Song. In 5:2–7 the woman told the Jerusalem women that the man came to her door at night but went away. She told them that now she longed to see him and was searching for him. Then she asked them to give him a message if they saw him (5:8). They asked why she was so attracted to him (5:9), and she replied by describing him (5:10–16). Then they asked her where he went (6:1), and she told them that he went down to his garden (6:2–3).
The section contains several interpretation issues:
In 5:2–7 did the woman describe a dream or a real event, or is 5:2–7 a poetic way to describe her feelings and thoughts about the man? The woman described one type of event (probably dreamed or imagined) as she and the man related to each other. The author did not always tell about events in order, and he repeated certain themes to examine them from different points of view. The Song is not a simple story but a poem, and it uses various ways to describe the romantic love.
Section 3:6–5:1 told about the wedding of the man and woman. Does Section 5:2–6:3 tell about a time after they married? Although 3:6–5:1 told about the wedding of the man and woman, 5:2–6:3 may not refer to a time after the wedding. It may describe something they experienced more than once. In other sections also, the man and woman were apart at the beginning but together at the end (as in 1:2–2:7). If 5:2–6:3 refers to a time before their wedding,Some scholars view the whole book, Song of Songs, as a large chiasm. (For example, Dorsey suggests abcdcʹbʹaʹ, (1999, p.200.)) So, the section, 3:6–5:1 is the central and climactic part of the chiasm, and what comes before and after are related to the center, not chronologically but thematically. So, the material both before and after, may be pointing to the grand central climax, the wedding. What follows the wedding, 5:2–8:14, may actually repeat much of the material in 1:2–3:5. Again, this is more of a cyclical rather than chronological way of understanding the book. it describes the woman’s hopes and fears as she imagined her future with the man (as in 3:1–4). The dream might indicate that she feared that he had stopped loving her, but at the end of 6:2–3, she realized that he continued to love her faithfully.Some scholars believe that this section follows chronologically after the wedding. Some of these scholars interpret it as describing a time of conflict for the newly married couple. But the theme of marital conflict does not seem to fit the overall message or tone of the Song.
How should a translator interpret the figures of speech in this section? Some scholars interpret these figures as euphemisms for sexual organs and sexual activity. However, such interpretations may cause a translator to refer more explicitly to sexual matters than is normal or justified in the Song. (For more information, see “Standards for respectful speech and actions in the Song” in POEM 4:1–7.)
There are different ways to interpret what the woman said in 5:2–8:
She told about something that she dreamed or imagined. She described her feelings for the man in a poetic way.
She told what happened when the man actually came to her. She was sleeping, but she woke up when she heard him knocking on her door.
It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1). The verses probably describe something that the woman dreamed or imagined, since some of the descriptions seem unreal or dreamlike. They are a poetic way to express the woman’s feelings for the man.
Does 5:2–8 describe sexual relations between the woman and man?
There are two views about whether 5:2–8 implies that they had sexual relations:
The verses indicate romantic feelings, but they do not describe sexual relations between the man and woman. He stood outside her house knocking, but she was already in bed. She delayed in opening her door, and he left before she opened it.
The verses have a double meaning.For example, in 5:4 they interpret the man’s “hand” and the door “latch” (literally “hole” in Hebrew) as referring to male and female sexual organs. Pope and some other modern commentators follow this view. The man was outside the room knocking on the door. He was also outside the woman’s body, wanting to enter and have sexual relations with her.
It is recommended that you follow option (1), which is followed by many reliable commentaries.See, for example, Assis, Barbiero, Bloch and Bloch, Davidson, Delitzsch, Elliott, Estes, Fox, Ginsburg, Gordis, Hess, Mitchell, and Murphy. Michael Fox argues that this view spoils the true romantic impact and beauty of the book (Fox, pages 144–145). The text indicates that the man did not come inside the woman’s house, but he left before she could open the door.
Common themes
This section has similar themes (motifs) that were part of earlier sections. You should translate such themes in a similar way throughout the book. This helps readers understand the unity of the Song. For example, as in 3:1–4, also here in 5:2–8, the author told about the woman having a dream and searching for her beloved in the town at night. Also, in 2:8–14, the young man stood outside the woman’s house, but she was inside behind a locked door. This theme of the woman being hard to reach is also found in 2:9; 2:14; 4:8; and 4:12.
O daughters of Jerusalem, I adjure you,
Women of Jerusalem, “Swear to me
You women of Jerusalem, promise me,
Then I said to the young women of Jerusalem, “Swear/Take an oath that
O daughters of Jerusalem, I adjure you: The phrase O daughters of Jerusalem, I adjure you, repeats 2:7a–b. It is good to translate it as you did there. For more information, see the Notes on 2:7a–b. This phrase also occurs in 3:5 and 8:4.
In some languages it is more natural to begin the verse with the direct address to the daughters of Jerusalem. For example:
Jerusalem women, I adjure you…
if you find my beloved,
that if you find/see my beloved,
if when searching you see my love,
tell him I am sick with love.
you will tell him that I feel faint with love.”
tell him that I am lovesick.
you will say to him, ‘Your beloved is overwhelmed with love for you.’ ”
if you find my beloved, tell him I am sick with love: When the woman said to the Jerusalem women, if you find my beloved, she implied that she wanted them to help her search for him. She told them a message that they should tell the man if they see him. The words of the message are in 5:8c.
Some other ways to translate 5:8b–c are:
it you find the one I love, please say to him, “She is weak with desire.” (CEV)
if you find my beloved, tell him that I am faint from wanting his love.
tell him I am sick with love: In some languages it may be helpful to translate this indirect quote as a direct quote. For example:
tell him, “The woman you love says that her desire for your love is so strong that she feels faint/sick.”
Say to him, “Your beloved says that she is faint with desire for you.”
sick with love: The Hebrew word that the BSB translates as sick can refer to a feeling of weakness or to an actual sickness. In this context the woman indicated that she was so overwhelmed by her feelings of love that she felt weak. She did not imply that she was sick with an illness. She might feel faint or dizzy because of her strong feelings of love. She could be “cured” by seeing her beloved again and enjoying his love.
Some other ways to translate this are:
faint with love (NRSV)
lovesick (NASB)
weak with desire (CEV)
The phrase sick with love also occurs in 2:5c.
It is possible that 5:8 is still part of the woman’s dream. The dream may continue to the end of the section in 6:3.
Note 1 topic: writing-oathformula
הִשְׁבַּ֥עְתִּי אֶתְכֶ֖ם בְּנ֣וֹת יְרוּשָׁלִָ֑ם
adjure ,you(pl) daughters_of Yərūshālam/(Jerusalem)
See how you translated the phrase I adjure you, daughters of Jerusalem in [2:7](../02/07.md).
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / hyperbole
שֶׁחוֹלַ֥ת אַהֲבָ֖ה אָֽנִי
(cmp)_[am],weak_of love I
See how you translated the phrase sick with love am I in [2:5](../02/05.md)
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis
שֶׁחוֹלַ֥ת אַהֲבָ֖ה אָֽנִי
(cmp)_[am],weak_of love I
The woman is leaving out some of the words that a sentence would need in many languages to be complete. If it would be helpful in your language, you could supply these words from the context.
5:8 I am weak with love: The woman’s trauma is an image for her lovesickness (cp. 2:5).
OET (OET-LV) I_adjure you(pl) Oh_daughters_of Yərūshālam/(Jerusalem) if you(pl)_will_find DOM lover_of_my what will_you(pl)_tell to_him/it (cmp)_am_weak_of love I.
OET (OET-RV) I adjure you, young women of Yerushalem:
⇔ if you find my dearest, what will you tell him?
⇔ Tell him that I’m sick with love.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.