InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Ezra C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C10
Ezra 9 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15
OET-LV And_just_ these_things _as_finished they_drew_near to_me the_leaders to_say not the_people Yisrāʼēl/(Israel) and_the_priests and_the_Lēviyyiy they_have_separated_themselves from_the_peoples_of the_lands according_to_of_their_abominations to_Kənaˊₐnī/(Canaanite)[s] the_Ḩittiy[s] the_Pərizzī[s] the_Yəⱱūşī the_ˊAmmōnī[s] the_Mōʼāⱱite[s] the_Miʦrayim/(Egypt)ian[s] and_the_ʼAmorī[s].
OET (OET-RV) Now as soon as those things were finished, the leaders came to me, saying, “The people of Yisrael (Israel), and the priests and Levites haven’t kept themselves separate from the idolatry of the peoples of the lands: the Kena’anim (Canaanites) , Hitim, Perizim, the Yevusim, Amonim, Moavim, Mitsrim (Egyptians) , and the Amorim.
Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-time-sequential
וּכְכַלּ֣וֹת אֵ֗לֶּה
and,just,as_finished (Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
This phrase indicates that the events the story will now relate came right after the events it has just described. In your translation, you can use the expression in your language that would best indicate this relationship.
Note 2 topic: writing-newevent
וּכְכַלּ֣וֹת
and,just,as_finished
The word now introduces a new event in the story. If your language has a word or expression for introducing a new event, use that here.
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
הַשָּׂרִים֙
(Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
These appear to be the same leaders as in 8:29, that is, clan leaders. But this is not a reference to all of them, since the ones who come to Ezra say that some of their fellow leaders have married foreign women. Alternate translation: [some of the clan leaders]
Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / quotemarks
נִגְּשׁ֨וּ אֵלַ֤י & לֵאמֹ֔ר
(Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
After this phrase Ezra begins to quote what these clan leaders told him. It may be helpful to your readers to indicate this with an opening quotation mark or with whatever other punctuation or convention your language uses to indicate the beginning of a quotation.
Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor
לֹֽא־נִבְדְּל֞וּ & מֵעַמֵּ֖י הָאֲרָצ֑וֹת
not (Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
Separation here is a spatial metaphor for behavior. As in 6:21, it means to refuse to do the same things as another group. Alternate translation: [have not refused to do the things that the other people groups living in the land do]
Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
מֵעַמֵּ֖י הָאֲרָצ֑וֹת כְּ֠תוֹעֲבֹֽתֵיהֶם
(Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
While the similar phrase in 6:21 spoke of “uncleanness,” that is, things that God does not accept, the phrase here speaks of abominations, that is, things that are very displeasing to God. Alternate translation: [from the things that are very displeasing to God that the other people groups living in the land do]
Note 7 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
מֵעַמֵּ֖י הָאֲרָצ֑וֹת
(Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
See how you translated this expression in 3:3. It refers to members of other people groups who were living in and around the province of Judah. Alternate translation: [from the other people groups living in the land]
Note 8 topic: translate-names
לַכְּנַעֲנִ֨י הַחִתִּ֜י הַפְּרִזִּ֣י הַיְבוּסִ֗י הָֽעַמֹּנִי֙ הַמֹּ֣אָבִ֔י הַמִּצְרִ֖י וְהָאֱמֹרִֽי
(Some words not found in UHB: and,just,as_finished these approached to=me the,leaders to=say not separated the,people Yisrael and,the,priests and,the,Levites from,the_peoples_of of,the_lands according,to_of,their_abominations to,Canaanite[s] the,Hittite[s] the,Perizzite[s] the=Yəⱱūşī the,Ammonite[s] the,Moabite[s] the,Egyptian[s] and,the,Amorite[s] )
These are the names of eight people groups.
OET-LV And_just_ these_things _as_finished they_drew_near to_me the_leaders to_say not the_people Yisrāʼēl/(Israel) and_the_priests and_the_Lēviyyiy they_have_separated_themselves from_the_peoples_of the_lands according_to_of_their_abominations to_Kənaˊₐnī/(Canaanite)[s] the_Ḩittiy[s] the_Pərizzī[s] the_Yəⱱūşī the_ˊAmmōnī[s] the_Mōʼāⱱite[s] the_Miʦrayim/(Egypt)ian[s] and_the_ʼAmorī[s].
OET (OET-RV) Now as soon as those things were finished, the leaders came to me, saying, “The people of Yisrael (Israel), and the priests and Levites haven’t kept themselves separate from the idolatry of the peoples of the lands: the Kena’anim (Canaanites) , Hitim, Perizim, the Yevusim, Amonim, Moavim, Mitsrim (Egyptians) , and the Amorim.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.