OET interlinear LEV 2:1

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-poetry

וְ⁠נֶ֗פֶשׁ כִּֽי־תַקְרִ֞יב קָרְבַּ֤ן מִנְחָה֙ לַֽ⁠יהוָ֔ה & קָרְבָּנ֑⁠וֹ

and,anyone (Some words not found in UHB: and,anyone that/for/because/then/when presents offering_of donation/offering to/for=YHWH fine_flour will_belong present_of,his and,he_will_pour on/upon=it(f) oil and=he/it_gave on/upon=it(f) frankincense )

Here a verb and its object come from the same root. The word presents translates a verb that is related to the noun translated as offering. The repetition of related words adds emphasis to the statement. If your language can repeat words for emphasis, it would be appropriate to use that construction here in your translation.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / 123person

וְ⁠נֶ֗פֶשׁ כִּֽי־תַקְרִ֞יב קָרְבַּ֤ן מִנְחָה֙ לַֽ⁠יהוָ֔ה & קָרְבָּנ֑⁠וֹ

and,anyone (Some words not found in UHB: and,anyone that/for/because/then/when presents offering_of donation/offering to/for=YHWH fine_flour will_belong present_of,his and,he_will_pour on/upon=it(f) oil and=he/it_gave on/upon=it(f) frankincense )

As the Introduction to Leviticus discusses, the book often speaks of the Israelites in the third person, even though it is a direct address. Here and throughout the book, if it would be helpful in your language, you could use the second person in your translation.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / declarative

סֹ֖לֶת יִהְיֶ֣ה קָרְבָּנ֑⁠וֹ וְ⁠יָצַ֤ק עָלֶ֨י⁠הָ֙ שֶׁ֔מֶן וְ⁠נָתַ֥ן עָלֶ֖י⁠הָ לְבֹנָֽה

fine_flour will_belong (Some words not found in UHB: and,anyone that/for/because/then/when presents offering_of donation/offering to/for=YHWH fine_flour will_belong present_of,his and,he_will_pour on/upon=it(f) oil and=he/it_gave on/upon=it(f) frankincense )

As the Introduction to Leviticus discusses, Leviticus often uses future statements to give instructions or commands. If it would be helpful in your language, here and throughout the book you could translate these future statements using command or instruction forms. Alternate translation: [his offering should be flour. And he should pour oil on it, and he should put incense on it]