InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Hag C1
Hag 2 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V21 V22 V23
OET-LV In_month on_day_twenty and_one of_month the_message_of YHWH it_came by_the_hand_of Ḩaggay the_prophet to_say.
OET (OET-RV) On the 21st of the seventh month (about a month later), Yahweh spoke again through the prophet Hagay:
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis
בַּשְּׁבִיעִ֕י בְּעֶשְׂרִ֥ים וְאֶחָ֖ד לַחֹ֑דֶשׁ
(Some words not found in UHB: in,[month] on_[day],twenty and,one of,month it_became message/matter_of YHWH by,the_hand_of Ḩaggay the,prophet to=say )
Here some words are omitted that in many languages a sentence would need in order to be complete. You can supply these words from the context if that would be clearer in your language. Alternate translation: [in the seventh month, on the twenty-first day of the month]
Note 2 topic: translate-ordinal
בַּשְּׁבִיעִ֕י בְּעֶשְׂרִ֥ים וְאֶחָ֖ד לַחֹ֑דֶשׁ
(Some words not found in UHB: in,[month] on_[day],twenty and,one of,month it_became message/matter_of YHWH by,the_hand_of Ḩaggay the,prophet to=say )
If your language does not use ordinal numbers, you could use cardinal numbers here. Alternate translation: [on day 21 of month seven]
Note 3 topic: translate-hebrewmonths
בַּשְּׁבִיעִ֕י בְּעֶשְׂרִ֥ים וְאֶחָ֖ד לַחֹ֑דֶשׁ
(Some words not found in UHB: in,[month] on_[day],twenty and,one of,month it_became message/matter_of YHWH by,the_hand_of Ḩaggay the,prophet to=say )
The twenty-first day of the seventh month on the Hebrew calendar is near the middle of October on Western calendars. See how you decided to translate the similar reference to a day and month in 1:1.
Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche
הָיָה֙ דְּבַר־יְהוָ֔ה בְּיַד־חַגַּ֥י הַנָּבִ֖יא
it_became (Some words not found in UHB: in,[month] on_[day],twenty and,one of,month it_became message/matter_of YHWH by,the_hand_of Ḩaggay the,prophet to=say )
See how you translated this same statement in 1:1. Alternate translation: [Haggai the prophet brought a message from Yahweh]
OET-LV In_month on_day_twenty and_one of_month the_message_of YHWH it_came by_the_hand_of Ḩaggay the_prophet to_say.
OET (OET-RV) On the 21st of the seventh month (about a month later), Yahweh spoke again through the prophet Hagay:
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.