OET interlinear LEV 23:2

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / quotations

דַּבֵּ֞ר אֶל־בְּנֵ֤י יִשְׂרָאֵל֙ וְ⁠אָמַרְתָּ֣ אֲלֵ⁠הֶ֔ם

(Some words not found in UHB: speak to/towards sons_of Yisrael and,you_will_say to,them appointed_feasts_of YHWH which/who proclaim DOM=them assemblies_of holy these they appointed_feasts_of,[are]_my )

See how you handled the beginning of the quote within a quote in 1:2 and throughout the book.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

מוֹעֲדֵ֣י יְהוָ֔ה אֲשֶׁר־תִּקְרְא֥וּ אֹתָ֖⁠ם מִקְרָאֵ֣י קֹ֑דֶשׁ אֵ֥לֶּה הֵ֖ם מוֹעֲדָֽ⁠י

appointed_feasts_of YHWH (Some words not found in UHB: speak to/towards sons_of Yisrael and,you_will_say to,them appointed_feasts_of YHWH which/who proclaim DOM=them assemblies_of holy these they appointed_feasts_of,[are]_my )

This verse repeats the phrase appointed times for emphasis. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could combine the phrases and express the emphasis in another way. Alternate translation: [These are the special times that Yahweh has set, which you must announce as holy gatherings] or [These are the times that Yahweh has chosen which you must announce for people to gather and worship him]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

מִקְרָאֵ֣י קֹ֑דֶשׁ

assemblies_of holy

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of holiness, you could express the same idea with an adjective. See how you translated this abstract noun in 8:9. Alternate translation: [as sacred assemblies] or [as holy gatherings]

Note 4 topic: writing-pronouns

אֵ֥לֶּה הֵ֖ם מוֹעֲדָֽ⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: speak to/towards sons_of Yisrael and,you_will_say to,them appointed_feasts_of YHWH which/who proclaim DOM=them assemblies_of holy these they appointed_feasts_of,[are]_my )

Here, my refers to Yahweh. Make sure this is clear in your translation. Alternate translation: [these are Yahweh’s appointed times]