OET interlinear ZEC 9:15

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-pronouns

יְהוָ֣ה צְבָאוֹת֮ יָגֵ֣ן עֲלֵי⁠הֶם֒

YHWH armies/messengers defend (on),them

The pronoun them refers to Yahweh’s people. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [Yahweh of Armies will defend his people]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וְ⁠אָכְל֗וּ וְ⁠כָֽבְשׁוּ֙ אַבְנֵי־קֶ֔לַע

and,they_will_eat and,they_will_subdue stones_of sling

Here Zechariah is speaking of the people utterly defeating their enemies as if they would devour them. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [they will completely defeat and will subdue those who attack them]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠שָׁת֥וּ הָמ֖וּ כְּמוֹ־יָ֑יִן

and,they_will_drink roar like wine

The point of this comparison is that just as men who have drunk wine become loud and boisterous, so the people will drink and roar in their triumph. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [they will drink and roar in triumph just as drunk men roar]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וּ⁠מָֽלְאוּ֙ כַּ⁠מִּזְרָ֔ק כְּ⁠זָוִיּ֖וֹת מִזְבֵּֽחַ

and,they_will_be_full like,bowl like_[the],corners altar

The point of this comparison is that just as the bowl and the corners of the altar were filled with sacrificial blood, so the people will be full. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [and they will be as full as the bowl and the corners of the altar are filled with sacrificial blood]