InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Zec C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14
Zec 6 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15
OET-LV And_I_returned and_I_lifted_up eyes_of_my and_I_saw and_BEHOLD/LO/SEE four chariots were_coming_forth from_between the_two_of the_mountains and_the_mountains were_mountains_of bronze.
OET (OET-RV) Then I turned and looked up and wow, I saw four chariots coming out from between two bronze mountains.
Note 1 topic: writing-newevent
וָאָשֻׁ֗ב
and,I_returned
Zechariah is using the phrase translated as And I turned to introduce a new event in the story. Use a word, phrase, or other method in your language that is natural for introducing a new event.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
וָאֶשָּׂ֤א עֵינַי֙
and,I_lifted_up eyes_of,my
Zechariah is using I lifted my eyes as a common expression of the culture to mean “I looked up.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [and I looked up]
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor
וְהִנֵּ֨ה
and=see/lo/see!
Zechariah is using the term behold to focus his listeners’ attention on what he is about to say. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation. Alternate translation: [and look]
Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo
אַרְבַּ֤ע מַרְכָּבוֹת֙ יֹֽצְא֔וֹת מִבֵּ֖ין שְׁנֵ֣י הֶֽהָרִ֑ים
four chariots coming_out from,between two_of the,mountains
Here, four chariots coming out from between two mountains represents the divine agents that Yahweh sends out to execute his purposes in the earth. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could include this information in a footnote. Alternate translation: [four chariots, which represent the divine agents Yahweh sends out to carry out his purposes, coming out from between two mountains]
Note 5 topic: writing-symlanguage
הָרֵ֥י נְחֹֽשֶׁת
mountains_of copper/brass/bronze//coin
Here, mountains of bronze represents the permanence and strength of Yahweh’s heavenly dwelling place. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could include this information in a footnote. Alternate translation: [represented the permanence and strength of Yahweh’s heavenly dwelling place]
OET-LV And_I_returned and_I_lifted_up eyes_of_my and_I_saw and_BEHOLD/LO/SEE four chariots were_coming_forth from_between the_two_of the_mountains and_the_mountains were_mountains_of bronze.
OET (OET-RV) Then I turned and looked up and wow, I saw four chariots coming out from between two bronze mountains.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.