OET interlinear ZEC 9:14

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-pronouns

וַֽ⁠יהוָה֙ עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֣ם יֵֽרָאֶ֔ה

and=YHWH over,them appear

The pronoun them refers to Yahweh’s people. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [And Yahweh will appear over his people]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / possession

בְּ⁠סַעֲר֥וֹת תֵּימָֽן

in_[the],storm_winds_of south

Zechariah is using the possessive form to describe storms that are characterized as coming from the south. If a speaker of your language would not use the possessive form for this, you could express this idea in another way. Alternate translation: [with the storms that come from the south]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וַֽ⁠אדֹנָ֤⁠י יְהֹוִה֙ בַּ⁠שּׁוֹפָ֣ר יִתְקָ֔ע וְ⁠הָלַ֖ךְ בְּ⁠סַעֲר֥וֹת תֵּימָֽן

and,[the]_of,Lord GOD on,horn sound and,he_will_go in_[the],storm_winds_of south

Here Zechariah is speaking of Yahweh as if he were a warrior who would blow on the trumpet and march with the storms of the south. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [and the Lord Yahweh will blow on the trumpet and will advance with great power]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠יָצָ֥א כַ⁠בָּרָ֖ק חִצּ֑⁠וֹ

and,it_will_go_forth like,lightning arrow_of,his

The point of this comparison is that just as the lightning flashes suddenly and strikes powerfully, so Yahweh’s arrow will strike his enemies swiftly and powerfully. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [and his arrow will go out suddenly and strike powerfully]