OET interlinear LEV 10:6

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: translate-symaction

רָֽאשֵׁי⁠כֶ֥ם אַל־תִּפְרָ֣עוּ ׀ וּ⁠בִגְדֵי⁠כֶ֤ם לֹֽא־תִפְרֹ֨מוּ֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

These are symbolic actions associated with mourning for dead relatives. If your language does not have similar actions associated with a period of mourning, consider explaining the meaning of these actions in a footnote or in the text of your translation. Alternate translation: [Do not mourn for your relatives by letting your heads be loose or by tearing your clothes]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

רָֽאשֵׁי⁠כֶ֥ם אַל־תִּפְרָ֣עוּ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

Here, the word heads refers by association to the hair of one’s head, so the expression Do not let your heads be loose refers to letting one’s hair hang down disheveled and unkempt. It is implied that Aaron’s sons’ hair was long enough to hang down from their heads. As the previous note suggests, this was a common practice associated with mourning for a dead relative. If it would be helpful in your language, consider stating the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [Do not let your long hair hang down loose]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / yousingular

רָֽאשֵׁי⁠כֶ֥ם & וּ⁠בִגְדֵי⁠כֶ֤ם & וְ⁠לֹ֣א תָמֻ֔תוּ & וַ⁠אֲחֵי⁠כֶם֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

Here the pronouns you and your are plural. They refer to Aaron’s sons, Eleazar and Ithamar, so use the plural form in your translation if your language marks that distinction.

Note 4 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

רָֽאשֵׁי⁠כֶ֥ם אַל־תִּפְרָ֣עוּ ׀ וּ⁠בִגְדֵי⁠כֶ֤ם לֹֽא־תִפְרֹ֨מוּ֙ וְ⁠לֹ֣א תָמֻ֔תוּ וְ⁠עַ֥ל כָּל־הָ⁠עֵדָ֖ה יִקְצֹ֑ף

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

Here, so that marks you will not die and against all the congregation he will not be angry as the goal or purpose of Do not let your heads be loose and do not tear your clothes. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that this is the purpose. Alternate translation: [Do not let your heads be loose and do not tear your clothes. If you do not do these things, you will not die and against all the congregation he will not be angry]

Note 5 topic: writing-pronouns

יִקְצֹ֑ף

angry

The pronoun he refers to Yahweh. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [Yahweh will not be angry]

Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וַ⁠אֲחֵי⁠כֶם֙

and,relatives_of,your(pl)

Here, the word brothers does not mean male relatives. Rather, it likely refers to all their fellow Israelites, who were to be considered to be members of a single extended family. Alternate translation: [But all your fellow Israelites]

Note 7 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

כָּל־בֵּ֣ית יִשְׂרָאֵ֔ל

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

Here, house refers to the whole people of Israel. If it would be helpful in your language, consider stating the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [all the people of Israel]

Note 8 topic: writing-poetry

אֶת־הַ⁠שְּׂרֵפָ֔ה אֲשֶׁ֖ר שָׂרַ֥ף יְהוָֽה

DOM (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

Here, a verb and its object come from the same root. The phrase Yahweh has burned translates as a verb that is related to the noun translated as burning. The repetition of related words adds emphasis to the statement. If your language can repeat words for emphasis and your language has comparable terms that you can use in your own translation, it would be appropriate to use that construction here in your translation.

Note 9 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

אֶת־הַ⁠שְּׂרֵפָ֔ה אֲשֶׁ֖ר שָׂרַ֥ף יְהוָֽה

DOM (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Mosheh to/near ʼAhₐron and,to,Eleazar and,to,Ithamar sons_of,his heads_of,your(pl) not dishevel and,garments_of,your(pl) not tear and=not die and,towards all/each/any/every the,congregation angry and,relatives_of,your(pl) all/each/any/every house_of Yisrael mourn DOM the,burning which/who destroyed_by_fire YHWH )

The word burning implies the fire that came out from the Holy Place and consumed Nadab and Abihu. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [for the way that Yahweh killed Nadab and Abihu with fire]