InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Lev C1 C2 C3 C4 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27
Lev 5 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19
OET-LV And_DOM the_second he_will_offer a_burnt_offering according_the_ordinance and_he_will_make_atonement on/upon/above_him/it the_priest/officer from_sin_of_his which he_has_sinned and_it_will_be_forgiven to_him/it.
OET (OET-RV) The second bird will be for a burnt offering as per the regulation. The priest will make the presenter right with God after their wrongdoing, and they’ll be forgiven.
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
כַּמִּשְׁפָּ֑ט
(Some words not found in UHB: and=DOM the=second he/it_made/did burnt_offering according,the_ordinance and,he_will_make_atonement on/upon/above=him/it the=priest/officer from,sin_of,his which/who committed and,it_will_be_forgiven to=him/it )
The phrase according to the regulation refers to the commandments and laws of Yahweh given to the people of Israel, likely the regulations for burnt offerings that Yahweh gave, which are recorded in the first chapter of Leviticus. If it would be helpful in your language, consider making this explicit. Alternate translation: [according to the laws for burnt offerings that Yahweh gave to the people of Israel]
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns
וְכִפֶּ֨ר עָלָ֧יו הַכֹּהֵ֛ן מֵחַטָּאת֥וֹ
(Some words not found in UHB: and=DOM the=second he/it_made/did burnt_offering according,the_ordinance and,he_will_make_atonement on/upon/above=him/it the=priest/officer from,sin_of,his which/who committed and,it_will_be_forgiven to=him/it )
See how you translated the similar expression in 1:4.
Note 3 topic: writing-poetry
מֵחַטָּאת֥וֹ אֲשֶׁר־חָטָ֖א
(Some words not found in UHB: and=DOM the=second he/it_made/did burnt_offering according,the_ordinance and,he_will_make_atonement on/upon/above=him/it the=priest/officer from,sin_of,his which/who committed and,it_will_be_forgiven to=him/it )
See how you handled the poetic repetition of words in the similar expression in 5:6.
Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive
וְנִסְלַ֥ח לֽוֹ
and,it_will_be_forgiven to=him/it
Alternate translation: [and Yahweh will forgive him for his sin]
OET-LV And_DOM the_second he_will_offer a_burnt_offering according_the_ordinance and_he_will_make_atonement on/upon/above_him/it the_priest/officer from_sin_of_his which he_has_sinned and_it_will_be_forgiven to_him/it.
OET (OET-RV) The second bird will be for a burnt offering as per the regulation. The priest will make the presenter right with God after their wrongdoing, and they’ll be forgiven.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.