OET interlinear EZRA 6:13

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

אֱ֠דַיִן

then

Here the word Then indicates that the sentence it introduces explains the result of what the previous sentences described. Alternate translation: [In response,]

Note 2 topic: translate-names

תַּתְּנַ֞י & שְׁתַ֥ר בּוֹזְנַ֖י

(Some words not found in UHB: then Tattənay governor_of province_beyond the,river Shətar- -bōzənay and,associates_of,their (to),before that/who sent Dārəyāvesh Oh/the=king this with_all_diligence ordered )

These are the names of two men. See how you translated them in 5:3.

וּ⁠כְנָוָתְ⁠ה֑וֹן

and,associates_of,their

Alternate translation: [and their colleagues]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

לָ⁠קֳבֵ֗ל דִּֽי־שְׁלַ֞ח דָּרְיָ֧וֶשׁ מַלְכָּ֛⁠א כְּנֵ֖מָא אָסְפַּ֥רְנָא עֲבַֽדוּ

(to),before (Some words not found in UHB: then Tattənay governor_of province_beyond the,river Shətar- -bōzənay and,associates_of,their (to),before that/who sent Dārəyāvesh Oh/the=king this with_all_diligence ordered )

The implication is that these men received the king’s response to their letter, and once they knew what he had commanded, they carried out his orders. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could say that explicitly. Alternate translation: [received the response of King Darius to their letter and immediately carried out exactly what he had ordered]