InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Neh C1 C2 C3 C4 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13
Neh 5 V1 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19
OET-LV And_there_were those_who were_saying sons_of_our and_daughters_of_our we are_many and_let_us_get grain and_we_eat and_so_that_we_may_live.
OET (OET-RV) Some of them complained, “There’s a lot of us when we include our sons and daughters. We need grain so we can eat and stay alive.”
וְיֵשׁ֙ אֲשֶׁ֣ר אֹמְרִ֔ים
and,there_[were] (Some words not found in UHB: and,there_[were] which/who saying sons_of,our and,daughters_of,our we many and,let_us_get grain and=we_eat and,so_that_we_may_live )
Verses 2, 3, 4, and 5 do not seem to be different complaints that people brought to Nehemiah separately. Rather, the whole group seems to be complaining that because they need to get food for their families, wealthier and more powerful Jews are exploiting them. They are forcing them to take mortgages and loans and even sell their children into slavery. Nehemiah is probably depicting one speaker after another in the crowd adding details to this picture. You could suggest this to the readers of your translation by introducing these comments with a translation such as, “some of them began to say”
בָּנֵ֥ינוּ וּבְנֹתֵ֖ינוּ אֲנַ֣חְנוּ רַבִּ֑ים
(Some words not found in UHB: and,there_[were] which/who saying sons_of,our and,daughters_of,our we many and,let_us_get grain and=we_eat and,so_that_we_may_live )
Alternate translation: [We have many children]
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche
וְנִקְחָ֥ה דָגָ֖ן
and,let_us_get grain
This does not mean only grain. The people complaining to Nehemiah are using one kind of food, grain, the staple of their diet, to refer to all the foods they would need to eat. Alternate translation: [we need food]
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
וְנִקְחָ֥ה דָגָ֖ן
and,let_us_get grain
The implication is that because the families are large, a lot of food is needed. If it would be helpful in your language, you could say this explicitly. Alternate translation: [we need to get a lot of food]
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / doublet
וְנֹאכְלָ֥ה וְנִחְיֶֽה
and=we_eat and,so_that_we_may_live
These two short phrases mean similar things. The people use them together to emphasize the urgency and importance of having food. If it would be helpful in your language, you could combine these phrases. Alternate translation: [to get enough food to stay alive]
OET-LV And_there_were those_who were_saying sons_of_our and_daughters_of_our we are_many and_let_us_get grain and_we_eat and_so_that_we_may_live.
OET (OET-RV) Some of them complained, “There’s a lot of us when we include our sons and daughters. We need grain so we can eat and stay alive.”
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.