OET interlinear NUM 17:10

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

לִ⁠פְנֵ֣י הָ⁠עֵד֔וּת

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

See how you translated the similar expression in [17:4](../17/04.md).

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

לְ⁠מִשְׁמֶ֥רֶת

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of keeping, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [to be kept]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

לִ⁠בְנֵי־מֶ֑רִי

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

Yahweh is using the sons of rebellion as a common expression of the culture to mean “the people who rebel.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [for the people who rebel]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

לִ⁠בְנֵי־מֶ֑רִי

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of rebellion, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [for the rebellious sons]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וּ⁠תְכַ֧ל תְּלוּנֹּתָ֛⁠ם מֵ⁠עָלַ֖⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

Here Yahweh is speaking as if the murmurings of the Israelites were a physical burden resting upon him. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. See how you translated the similar phrase in [verse 5](../../num/17/05.md). Alternate translation: [And you shall end their murmuring against me]

Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

תְּלוּנֹּתָ֛⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of murmurings, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [the words they murmur]

Note 7 topic: grammar-connect-logic-goal

וְ⁠לֹ֥א יָמֻֽתוּ

(Some words not found in UHB: get_away from,among_of the,congregation (the),this so,that_I_may_make_an_end_of DOM=them like,a_moment and=they_fell on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in faces_of,their )

Here, and marks they shall not die as the goal or purpose of you shall finish their murmurings from upon me. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that this is the purpose. Alternate translation: [and that way, they shall not die]