OET interlinear NUM 17:5

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וַ⁠הֲשִׁכֹּתִ֣י מֵֽ⁠עָלַ֗⁠י אֶת־תְּלֻנּוֹת֙ בְּנֵ֣י יִשְׂרָאֵ֔ל

and,I_will_put_an_end_to from,on,me DOM grumblings_of sons_of Yisrael

Here Yahweh is speaking as if the murmurings of the Israelites were a physical burden resting upon him. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [And I will end the murmurings of the sons of Israel that trouble me]

Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וַ⁠הֲשִׁכֹּתִ֣י

and,I_will_put_an_end_to

The word translated as And indicates that what follows is a result of what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a result of what came before. Alternate translation: [As a result, I will cause to subside]

Note 3 topic: writing-poetry

תְּלֻנּוֹת֙ בְּנֵ֣י יִשְׂרָאֵ֔ל אֲשֶׁ֛ר הֵ֥ם מַלִּינִ֖ם עֲלֵי⁠כֶֽם

grumblings_of sons_of Yisrael which/who they grumbling on,you(pl)

Yahweh is using a construction in which a verb and its object come from the same root. You may be able to use the same construction in your language to express the meaning here. Alternatively, your language may have another way of saying this. Alternate translation: [the murmurings of the sons of Israel against you] or [how the sons of Israel murmur against you]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / yousingular

עֲלֵי⁠כֶֽם

on,you(pl)

Here, the pronoun you is plural and refers to Moses and Aaron. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [against the two of you]