InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse 1 Ki C1 C2 C3 C4 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22
1 Ki 5 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18
Places tagged in the matching LV passage: Lebanon (DEU 1:7)
OET-LV (KI1 5:20) [fn] And_now command so_that_people_may_cut to_me cedars from (the)_Ləⱱānōn and_servants_of_my they_will_be with your_servants and_the_wage[s]_of your_servants I_will_give to/for_yourself(m) according_to_all that you_will_say if/because you you_know if/because_that there_is_not among_us anyone who_knows to_cut wood(s) like_Tsīdonī/(Sidonians).
5:20 Note: KJB: 1Kgs.5.6
OET (OET-RV) So now, please give the command to fell cedars for me from the Levanon forest. Let my servants accompany your servants and I’ll pay your servants’ wages whatever amount you set, because you yourself know that there are no other workers who know how to fell trees like the Tsidonim (Sidonians).”
Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-words-phrases
וְעַתָּ֡ה
(Some words not found in UHB: and=now command so,that_people_may_cut to=me cedars from/more_than (the),Lebanon and,servants_of,my be with your=servants and,the_wage[s]_of your=servants give to/for=yourself(m) according,to_all which/who say that/for/because/then/when you(ms) know that/for/because/then/when not among,us (a)_man knowing to,cut timber like,Sidonians )
See how you translated the similar expression in 1:12.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / imperative
צַוֵּה֩
(Some words not found in UHB: and=now command so,that_people_may_cut to=me cedars from/more_than (the),Lebanon and,servants_of,my be with your=servants and,the_wage[s]_of your=servants give to/for=yourself(m) according,to_all which/who say that/for/because/then/when you(ms) know that/for/because/then/when not among,us (a)_man knowing to,cut timber like,Sidonians )
The word translated as command is an imperative, but it communicates a polite request rather than a command. Use a form in your language that communicates a polite request. It may be helpful to add an expression such as “please” to make this clear. Alternate translation: [please command]
Note 3 topic: writing-pronouns
וְיִכְרְתוּ
so,that_people_may_cut
Here Solomon is using the pronoun they to refer to Hiram’s workers. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [and may your workers cut]
Note 4 topic: grammar-connect-words-phrases
כִּ֣י
(Some words not found in UHB: and=now command so,that_people_may_cut to=me cedars from/more_than (the),Lebanon and,servants_of,my be with your=servants and,the_wage[s]_of your=servants give to/for=yourself(m) according,to_all which/who say that/for/because/then/when you(ms) know that/for/because/then/when not among,us (a)_man knowing to,cut timber like,Sidonians )
Here the word For introduces not a reason but an explanation. Alternate translation: [After all,]
Note 5 topic: writing-pronouns
אַתָּ֣ה יָדַ֗עְתָּ
(Some words not found in UHB: and=now command so,that_people_may_cut to=me cedars from/more_than (the),Lebanon and,servants_of,my be with your=servants and,the_wage[s]_of your=servants give to/for=yourself(m) according,to_all which/who say that/for/because/then/when you(ms) know that/for/because/then/when not among,us (a)_man knowing to,cut timber like,Sidonians )
See how you translated the similar expression in 2:5. Alternate translation: [You know quite well]
OET-LV (KI1 5:20) [fn] And_now command so_that_people_may_cut to_me cedars from (the)_Ləⱱānōn and_servants_of_my they_will_be with your_servants and_the_wage[s]_of your_servants I_will_give to/for_yourself(m) according_to_all that you_will_say if/because you you_know if/because_that there_is_not among_us anyone who_knows to_cut wood(s) like_Tsīdonī/(Sidonians).
5:20 Note: KJB: 1Kgs.5.6
OET (OET-RV) So now, please give the command to fell cedars for me from the Levanon forest. Let my servants accompany your servants and I’ll pay your servants’ wages whatever amount you set, because you yourself know that there are no other workers who know how to fell trees like the Tsidonim (Sidonians).”
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.