InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Ezra C1 C2 C3 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10
Ezra 4 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V22 V23 V24
OET-LV Now make a_decree[fn] to_make_to_cease the_men these and_the_city this not it_will_be_built until from_me the_decree it_will_be_made.
4:21 OSHB note: We read the punctuation in L differently from BHQ.
OET (OET-RV) So command those Yehudim to stop rebuilding the city until such time as I make a decree.
Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-words-phrases
כְּעַן֙
(Some words not found in UHB: now issue order to,make_to_cease the,men these and,the,city this not rebuilt until from=me the,decree issued )
The word Now is similar to the expression “and now” in 4:10, 4:11, and 4:17. As in 4:13 and 4:14, it introduces an important point within a letter. If your language has a comparable expression that it uses for this same purpose, you can use that in your translation.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
שִׂ֣ימוּ טְּעֵ֔ם לְבַטָּלָ֖א גֻּבְרַיָּ֣א אִלֵּ֑ךְ
(Some words not found in UHB: now issue order to,make_to_cease the,men these and,the,city this not rebuilt until from=me the,decree issued )
These men means the Jews. This is a reference back to the letter from the Samaritan officials in which they speak of “the Jews who went up from near you” and who “have come to us at Jerusalem” (4:12). The implication is that the Jews are to stop rebuilding the walls and buildings in Jerusalem. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could say this explicitly. Alternate translation: [issue a decree to make those Jews who returned to Jerusalem from exile stop rebuilding the walls and buildings in Jerusalem]
Note 3 topic: grammar-connect-logic-goal
וְקִרְיְתָ֥א דָךְ֙ לָ֣א תִתְבְּנֵ֔א עַד־מִנִּ֖י טַעְמָ֥א יִתְּשָֽׂם
and,the,city this not (Some words not found in UHB: now issue order to,make_to_cease the,men these and,the,city this not rebuilt until from=me the,decree issued )
The phrase so that indicates that the clause that follows describes the purpose for which Artaxerxes wants the officials to issue a decree. It is to make the Jews stop working on the walls and houses. He does not want there to be any rebuilding in Jerusalem unless he authorizes it personally. Alternate translation: [because I want this decree to prevent all rebuilding unless I issue a decree permitting it]
OET-LV Now make a_decree[fn] to_make_to_cease the_men these and_the_city this not it_will_be_built until from_me the_decree it_will_be_made.
4:21 OSHB note: We read the punctuation in L differently from BHQ.
OET (OET-RV) So command those Yehudim to stop rebuilding the city until such time as I make a decree.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.