OET interlinear NUM 16:29

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

כְּ⁠מ֤וֹת כָּל־הָֽ⁠אָדָם֙ יְמֻת֣וּ⁠ן אֵ֔לֶּה וּ⁠פְקֻדַּת֙ כָּל־הָ֣⁠אָדָ֔ם יִפָּקֵ֖ד עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֑ם

like,the_death_of all/each/any/every the=humankind they,will_die these and,the_visitation_of all/each/any/every the=humankind suffer on,them

These two phrases as the death of every man these die and the oversight of every man is counted upon them mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could combine them and express the emphasis in another way. Alternate translation: [as the death of every man these die in an ordinary way]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

כְּ⁠מ֤וֹת כָּל־הָֽ⁠אָדָם֙

like,the_death_of all/each/any/every the=humankind

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of death, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [as every man dies]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / gendernotations

כָּל־הָֽ⁠אָדָם֙ & כָּל־הָ֣⁠אָדָ֔ם

all/each/any/every the=humankind & all/each/any/every the=humankind

Here the masculine term man has a generic sense that includes both men and women. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could use language in your translation that is clearly inclusive of both men and women. Alternate translation: [every human … every human]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / euphemism

וּ⁠פְקֻדַּת֙ כָּל־הָ֣⁠אָדָ֔ם יִפָּקֵ֖ד עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֑ם

and,the_visitation_of all/each/any/every the=humankind suffer on,them

Moses is referring to death in a polite way by using the phrase the oversight of every man is counted upon them. Depending on what is helpful in your language, you could use a polite way of referring to this in your language, or you could state this plainly. Alternate translation: [and the fate of every man happens to them] or [and they experience death like everyone else does]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

וּ⁠פְקֻדַּת֙ כָּל־הָ֣⁠אָדָ֔ם

and,the_visitation_of all/each/any/every the=humankind

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of oversight, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [and how every man is overseen]

Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis

לֹ֥א יְהוָ֖ה שְׁלָחָֽ⁠נִי

not YHWH he,has_sent_me

Moses is leaving out some of the words that in many languages a sentence would need in order to be complete. You can supply these words from the context if that would be clearer in your language. Alternate translation: [then you will know that Yahweh did not send me]