OET interlinear PSA 128:6

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-goal

וּ⁠רְאֵֽה

and,see

Here, and that marks you may see sons to your sons as a further goal or purpose of Yahweh’s blessing in the previous verse. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that this is the purpose. Alternate translation: [and also so that you may see]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / gendernotations

בָנִ֥ים לְ⁠בָנֶ֑י⁠ךָ

children of,children_of,your

Here the masculine term sons has a generic sense that includes both male and female descendants. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could use language in your translation that is clearly inclusive of both men and women. Alternate translation: [children of your children]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

בָנִ֥ים לְ⁠בָנֶ֑י⁠ךָ

children of,children_of,your

The psalmist is using sons to your sons as a common expression of the culture to mean grandchildren. If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [many descendants]

Note 4 topic: translate-blessing

שָׁ֝ל֗וֹם עַל־יִשְׂרָאֵֽל

(Some words not found in UHB: and,see children of,children_of,your peace on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in Yisrael )

The psalmist is asking Yahweh to bless the people of Israel. In your translation, use a form that people would recognize as a blessing in your language. You might express this as a prayer, if that would be more natural in your language. Alternate translation: [May Yahweh give peace to Israel]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

שָׁ֝ל֗וֹם עַל

(Some words not found in UHB: and,see children of,children_of,your peace on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in Yisrael )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of Peace, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [May well-being come upon]