OET interlinear 2 SAM 4:4

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

בֶּן־חָמֵ֣שׁ שָׁנִ֣ים הָיָ֡ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and_[belonged],to,Jonathan son_of Shāʼūl/(Saul)'s son crippled_of feet son_of five years it_became when,came news_of Shāʼūl/(Saul) and,Jonathan from,Jezreel and,she,lifted_him nurse_of,his and,she_fled and=he/it_was when,she,made_haste to,flee and,he_fell and,he_became_lame and=his/its=name Mephiboshet )

See how you translated the similar expression in 2:10. Alternate translation: [He was five years of age]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / personification

בְּ⁠בֹ֣א שְׁמֻעַת֩ שָׁא֨וּל וִ⁠יהֽוֹנָתָ֜ן מִֽ⁠יִּזְרְעֶ֗אל

(Some words not found in UHB: and_[belonged],to,Jonathan son_of Shāʼūl/(Saul)'s son crippled_of feet son_of five years it_became when,came news_of Shāʼūl/(Saul) and,Jonathan from,Jezreel and,she,lifted_him nurse_of,his and,she_fled and=he/it_was when,she,made_haste to,flee and,he_fell and,he_became_lame and=his/its=name Mephiboshet )

The author is speaking of the report as if it were a living thing that could have come from a place. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [when people came from Jezreel and reported about Saul and Jonathan]