OET interlinear LEV 4:10

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-pronouns

כַּ⁠אֲשֶׁ֣ר יוּרַ֔ם מִ⁠שּׁ֖וֹר זֶ֣בַח הַ⁠שְּׁלָמִ֑ים

(Some words not found in UHB: just=as removed from,the_ox_of sacrifice_of of,the_peace_offering(s) and,he,will_make_them_smoke the=priest/officer on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in altar_of of_(the),burnt_offering )

Here, it refers to all the fat that was described in the instructions about peace offerings in [3:3–4](../03/03.md). If it would be helpful, consider making this explicit. Alternate translation: [just as the fat is lifted up from the ox of the sacrifice of the peace offering]

Note 2 topic: translate-tense

כַּ⁠אֲשֶׁ֣ר יוּרַ֔ם מִ⁠שּׁ֖וֹר זֶ֣בַח הַ⁠שְּׁלָמִ֑ים

(Some words not found in UHB: just=as removed from,the_ox_of sacrifice_of of,the_peace_offering(s) and,he,will_make_them_smoke the=priest/officer on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in altar_of of_(the),burnt_offering )

Here the author of Leviticus does not use the present tense to describe contemporaneous or ongoing action, as if he were here referring to a specific instance where an individual was preparing a peace offering. Rather, the present tense is being used both to describe an action that was previously described in the book of Leviticus and to depict a hypothetical situation. If it would be helpful in your language, consider choosing language that makes it plain that the author is not referring to specific past actions. Alternate translation: [in the same manner as it would be lifted up from the ox of the sacrifice of the peace offering]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

כַּ⁠אֲשֶׁ֣ר יוּרַ֔ם

(Some words not found in UHB: just=as removed from,the_ox_of sacrifice_of of,the_peace_offering(s) and,he,will_make_them_smoke the=priest/officer on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in altar_of of_(the),burnt_offering )

If your language does not use the passive form in this way, you can state this in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation: [just as the individual lifted up the fat] or, if you used the second-person form in Chapter 3, [just as you lifted up the fat]

Note 4 topic: writing-pronouns

וְ⁠הִקְטִירָ⁠ם֙ הַ⁠כֹּהֵ֔ן

and,he,will_make_them_smoke (Some words not found in UHB: just=as removed from,the_ox_of sacrifice_of of,the_peace_offering(s) and,he,will_make_them_smoke the=priest/officer on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in altar_of of_(the),burnt_offering )

The pronoun them refers to all the pieces of fat and the internal organs described in [4:8–9](../04/08.md). If it would be helpful, consider making this explicit. Alternate translation: [And the priest shall cause all the fat pieces and the internal organs to become smoke]