OET interlinear NUM 15:24

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

מֵ⁠עֵינֵ֣י הָ⁠עֵדָה֮

away,from_the_eyes_of of,the_congregation

Here, from the eyes of represents the knowledge or awareness of the congregation. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [without the knowledge of the congregation]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

נֶעֶשְׂתָ֣ה

done

The expression it was done is a passive verbal form. If your language would not use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. If you need to say who does the action, the context indicates that it is the Israelites. Alternate translation: [you did it]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

בֶּן־בָּקָר֩ אֶחָ֨ד

son_of bull one(ms)

Here, the author is speaking of a young bull as if it were actually a son of cattle. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. See how you translated the similar phrase in verse 8. Alternate translation: [one that is young]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

כַּ⁠מִּשְׁפָּ֑ט

according,the_ordinance

The implication is that these offerings must be made according to the instructions that Yahweh had already given about grain and drink offerings. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [according to the ordinance about grain and drink offerings I just gave you]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / possession

וּ⁠שְׂעִיר־עִזִּ֥ים אֶחָ֖ד

and,a_male_goat_of goats one(ms)

The author is using the possessive form to describe a buck that is characterized by being one of the goats. If a speaker of your language would not use the possessive form for this, you could express this idea in another way. See how you translated this phrase in chapter 7:16. Alternate translation: [and a goat that is a buck] or [and an adult male goat]