OET interlinear REV 6:13

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo

οἱ ἀστέρες τοῦ οὐρανοῦ

the stars ˱of˲_the sky

It might seem that the expression the stars of the sky contains extra information that would be unnatural to express in your language. If so, you can shorten it. Alternate translation: [the stars]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

ἔπεσαν

fell

The point of this comparison is that just as all the fruit on a fig tree might fall at once if a great wind shook the tree, so John saw all of the stars fall at once. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [all fell at once]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

ὑπὸ ἀνέμου μεγάλου σειομένη

(Some words not found in SR-GNT: καί οἱ ἀστέρες τοῦ οὐρανοῦ ἔπεσαν εἰς τήν γῆν ὡς συκῆ βάλλει τούς ὀλύνθους αὐτῆς ὑπό ἀνέμου μεγάλου σειομένη)

If your language does not use this passive form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation, with no comma preceding: [when a great wind shakes it]

Note 4 topic: translate-unknown

ὡς συκῆ βάλλει τοὺς ὀλύνθους αὐτῆς

as ˓a˒_fig_tree ˓is˒_casting (Some words not found in SR-GNT: καί οἱ ἀστέρες τοῦ οὐρανοῦ ἔπεσαν εἰς τήν γῆν ὡς συκῆ βάλλει τούς ὀλύνθους αὐτῆς ὑπό ἀνέμου μεγάλου σειομένη)

If your readers would not be familiar with a fig tree, you could use the name of a fruit tree that they would recognize or you could use a general expression. Alternate translation: [as a fruit tree drops its late-ripening fruit]

Note 5 topic: translate-unknown

τοὺς ὀλύνθους

(Some words not found in SR-GNT: καί οἱ ἀστέρες τοῦ οὐρανοῦ ἔπεσαν εἰς τήν γῆν ὡς συκῆ βάλλει τούς ὀλύνθους αὐτῆς ὑπό ἀνέμου μεγάλου σειομένη)

The term unripe describes fruit that normally remains on a tree and ripens later. Alternate translation: [later-ripening fruit]