OET interlinear NUM 15:20

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

רֵאשִׁית֙ עֲרִסֹ֣תֵ⁠כֶ֔ם חַלָּ֖ה תָּרִ֣ימוּ

beginning_of your(pl)_dough(s)_of,your(pl) loaf present

By the first of your dough, the author means the first dough made from a new harvest of grain. You could indicate this explicitly in your translation if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [When you first make dough from a new harvest of grain, you must make a loaf that you shall raise]

Note 2 topic: translate-ordinal

רֵאשִׁית֙ עֲרִסֹ֣תֵ⁠כֶ֔ם

beginning_of your(pl)_dough(s)_of,your(pl)

If your language would not represent a number in a form such as first, you could represent this number in a form that your language would use. Alternate translation: [Some of the initial batch of]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

תָּרִ֣ימוּ & תָּרִ֥ימוּ אֹתָֽ⁠הּ

present & present DOM=her/it

Here, Moses is speaking of setting grain aside as if it were actually raising it up to God. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. See how you translated the similar phrase in [verse 19](../15/19.md). Alternate translation: [you shall set apart … you shall set it apart]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

כִּ⁠תְרוּמַ֣ת גֹּ֔רֶן כֵּ֖ן תָּרִ֥ימוּ אֹתָֽ⁠הּ

like,a_contribution_of threshing_floor yes/correct/thus/so present DOM=her/it

The implication is that the contribution from the first dough should be treated the same way as contributions from grain harvested at the threshing floor. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [When you raise it, it counts as a contribution of the threshing floor] or [You shall raise it in the same way that you raise a contribution of the threshing floor]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / possession

כִּ⁠תְרוּמַ֣ת גֹּ֔רֶן

like,a_contribution_of threshing_floor

The author is using the possessive form to describe a contribution that is characterized by coming from the threshing floor. If a speaker of your language would not use the possessive form for this, you could express this idea in another way. Alternate translation: [a contribution that comes from the threshing floor]