OET interlinear REV 14:11

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

τοῦ βασανισμοῦ αὐτῶν

˱of˲_the torment ˱of˲_them

The third angel is referring to the burning sulfur with which God is tormenting these people by association with the torment itself. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [of the burning sulfur with which God is tormenting them]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

εἰς αἰῶνας αἰώνων

to ˓the˒_ages ˱of˲_˓the˒_ages

This expression refers to endless future time. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [for all eternity]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / merism

ἡμέρας καὶ νυκτός

˱by˲_day (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί ὁ καπνός τοῦ βασανισμοῦ αὐτῶν εἰς αἰῶνας αἰώνων ἀναβαίνει καί οὐκ ἔχουσιν ἀνάπαυσιν ἡμέρας καί νυκτός οἱ προσκυνοῦντες τό θηρίον καί τήν εἰκόνα αὐτοῦ καί εἰ τὶς λαμβάνει τό χάραγμα τοῦ ὀνόματος αὐτοῦ)

The angel is using the two parts of a full day, day and night, to mean all the time. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [at any time]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

εἴ τις λαμβάνει

(Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί ὁ καπνός τοῦ βασανισμοῦ αὐτῶν εἰς αἰῶνας αἰώνων ἀναβαίνει καί οὐκ ἔχουσιν ἀνάπαυσιν ἡμέρας καί νυκτός οἱ προσκυνοῦντες τό θηρίον καί τήν εἰκόνα αὐτοῦ καί εἰ τὶς λαμβάνει τό χάραγμα τοῦ ὀνόματος αὐτοῦ)

The angel is using a characteristic expression of the Greek language. Alternate translation: [anyone who receives]