OET interlinear JOB 11:20

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וְ⁠עֵינֵ֥י רְשָׁעִ֗ים תִּ֫כְלֶ֥ינָה

and,eyes_of wicked fail

Zophar is referring to death by association with the way people’s eyes fail when they are about to die (either in the sense of becoming visibly dim or in the sense of no longer seeing well). If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “But the wicked will die”

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / personification

וּ֭⁠מָנוֹס אָבַ֣ד מִנְ⁠הֶ֑ם

and,way_of_escape lost to,them

Zophar is speaking of escape as if it were a living thing that could perish. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “yes, they will not be able to escape dying”

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / euphemism

וְ֝⁠תִקְוָתָ֗⁠ם מַֽפַּח־נָֽפֶשׁ

and,hope_of,their gasp_of soul

Zophar is using the phrase expiration of breath, which means “breathing out,” to mean dying. This is a mild way of referring to death. Your language may have a similar expression that you could use in your translation. You could also use plain language. Alternate translation: “they will have no hope other than to pass away” or “they will have no hope other than to die”