OET interlinear PSA 21:8

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

תִּמְצָ֣א יָ֭דְ⁠ךָ לְ⁠כָל־אֹיְבֶ֑י⁠ךָ יְ֝מִֽינְ⁠ךָ תִּמְצָ֥א שֹׂנְאֶֽי⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when the=king trusts in,Yahweh and,in,the_covenant_loyalty_of most_high not shaken )

These two phrases mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. Hebrew poetry was based on this kind of repetition, and you may want to show this to your readers by including both phrases in your translation. If it is helpful, you could connect the phrases in a way that shows that the second phrase is repeating the first one, not saying something additional. Alternate translation: [Your hand will find all of your enemies, indeed, your right hand will find those who hate you]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

יָ֭דְ⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when the=king trusts in,Yahweh and,in,the_covenant_loyalty_of most_high not shaken )

The pronoun Your refers to the king. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [You, the king’s hand] or [The king’s hand]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

תִּמְצָ֣א יָ֭דְ⁠ךָ & יְ֝מִֽינְ⁠ךָ תִּמְצָ֥א

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when the=king trusts in,Yahweh and,in,the_covenant_loyalty_of most_high not shaken )

David is using Your hand will find as a common expression of his culture to mean “You will reach” or “You will overtake.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [You will reach … you will overtake]