OET interlinear PSA 21:10

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-pronouns

תְּאַבֵּ֑ד

(Some words not found in UHB: you,will_make_them like,a_furnace_of fiery to,the_time_of your(pl)_presence_of,your YHWH in,anger_of,his he,will_swallow_them_up and,it,will_consume_them fire )

The pronoun You refers to the king. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [You, God’s king, will destroy]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

פִּ֭רְיָ⁠מוֹ & וְ֝⁠זַרְעָ֗⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: you,will_make_them like,a_furnace_of fiery to,the_time_of your(pl)_presence_of,your YHWH in,anger_of,his he,will_swallow_them_up and,it,will_consume_them fire )

David is speaking of their fruit and their seed as if his enemies’ descendants were literal fruit and literal seed that could be destroyed. If this image does not communicate well in your language, you could express this as a comparison or use plain language. Alternate translation: [their descendants … and their offspring]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

מִ⁠בְּנֵ֥י אָדָֽם

(Some words not found in UHB: you,will_make_them like,a_furnace_of fiery to,the_time_of your(pl)_presence_of,your YHWH in,anger_of,his he,will_swallow_them_up and,it,will_consume_them fire )

David is using from among the sons of man as a common expression of his culture to mean “from among humanity” or “from the human race.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [from among the human race] or [from among humanity]