OET interlinear 1SA 31:4

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

שְׁלֹ֥ף חַרְבְּ⁠ךָ֣ ׀ וְ⁠דָקְרֵ֣⁠נִי בָ֗⁠הּ פֶּן־יָ֠בוֹאוּ הָ⁠עֲרֵלִ֨ים הָ⁠אֵ֤לֶּה וּ⁠דְקָרֻ֨⁠נִי֙ וְ⁠הִתְעַלְּלוּ־בִ֔⁠י

draw sword_of,your and,thrust_~_through,me in/on/at/with,it lest come the,uncircumcised the=these and,thrust_~_through,me and,make_sport in/on/at/with,me

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [So that these uncircumcised ones do not come and stab me and abuse me, draw your sword and stab me with it]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche

וְ⁠דָקְרֵ֣⁠נִי

and,thrust_~_through,me

Saul is using the first part of killing someone with a sword, to stab that person, to mean the entire act of killing. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [and kill me]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / nominaladj

הָ⁠עֲרֵלִ֨ים הָ⁠אֵ֤לֶּה

the,uncircumcised the=these

Saul is using the adjective uncircumcised as a noun to mean a certain kind of person. See how you translated this in [14:6](../14/06.md). Alternate translation: [these uncircumcised Philistines]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

הָ⁠עֲרֵלִ֨ים הָ⁠אֵ֤לֶּה

the,uncircumcised the=these

Saul is using this expression as a term of derision. See how you translated it in [14:6](../14/06.md). Alternate translation: [these heathen]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

וְ⁠הִתְעַלְּלוּ־בִ֔⁠י

and,make_sport in/on/at/with,me

By abuse, Saul means that the Philistines would taunt and torture him. You could indicate this explicitly in your translation if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [and taunt and torture me]

Note 6 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וְ⁠לֹ֤א אָבָה֙ נֹשֵׂ֣א כֵלָ֔י⁠ו כִּ֥י יָרֵ֖א מְאֹ֑ד

and=not would lifting/taking armor_of,his that/for/because/then/when fearing very

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [But since the carrier of his equipment feared greatly, he was not willing]

Note 7 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

אֶת־הַ⁠חֶ֔רֶב

DOM the=drought//sword/knife

By the sword, the author means Saul’s own sword. You could indicate this explicitly in your translation if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [his own sword]