OET interlinear JDG 4:24

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / reduplication

וַ⁠תֵּ֜לֶךְ יַ֤ד בְּנֵֽי־יִשְׂרָאֵל֙ הָל֣וֹךְ וְ⁠קָשָׁ֔ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and,it_went hand_of sons_of Yisrael to_grow and,hard on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in Yāⱱīn/(Jabin) king Kənaˊan until which/who destroyed DOM Yāⱱīn/(Jabin) king Kənaˊan )

The author is repeating forms of the verb “go”—going and went—in order to intensify the idea that this word expresses. If your language can repeat words for intensification, it would be appropriate to do that here in your translation. If not, your language may have another way of expressing the emphasis. Alternate translation: [For the hand of the sons of Israel became more and more severe]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / reduplication

יָבִ֣ין מֶֽלֶךְ־כְּנָ֑עַן & אֵ֖ת יָבִ֥ין מֶֽלֶךְ־כְּנָֽעַן

Yāⱱīn/(Jabin) king (Some words not found in UHB: and,it_went hand_of sons_of Yisrael to_grow and,hard on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in Yāⱱīn/(Jabin) king Kənaˊan until which/who destroyed DOM Yāⱱīn/(Jabin) king Kənaˊan )

The author is repeating this phrase for emphasis. If it would not be natural in your language to do that, you may have another way of expressing the emphasis. The UST models one way to do this.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

הִכְרִ֔יתוּ אֵ֖ת יָבִ֥ין

destroyed DOM Yāⱱīn/(Jabin)

The author is using the name Jabin by association to mean the army of this king, which the Israelites destroyed. (The book does not say specifically that the Israelites killed Jabin himself.) Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation. Alternate translation: [they broke the power of Jabin]