InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Job C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31 C32 C33 C34 C35 C36 C37 C38 C39 C40 C41 C42
Job 16 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V17 V18 V19 V20 V21 V22
OET-LV Face_of_my they_are_reddened[fn] from weeping and_is_on eyelids_of_my deep_darkness.
16:16 OSHB variant note: חמרמרה: (x-qere) ’חֳ֭מַרְמְרוּ’: lemma=2560 c n=1.0 morph=HVjp3cp id=18byd חֳ֭מַרְמְרוּ
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy
וְעַ֖ל עַפְעַפַּ֣י צַלְמָֽוֶת
and_[is],on (Some words not found in UHB: face_of,my is_red with weeping and_[is],on eyelids_of,my deep_darkness )
Job is describing the fact that he has not been sleeping well, by association with the way that dark circles form around the eyes of someone who lacks sleep. You could indicate that in your translation if it would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [and I have dark circles around my eyes from lack of sleep]
OET-LV Face_of_my they_are_reddened[fn] from weeping and_is_on eyelids_of_my deep_darkness.
16:16 OSHB variant note: חמרמרה: (x-qere) ’חֳ֭מַרְמְרוּ’: lemma=2560 c n=1.0 morph=HVjp3cp id=18byd חֳ֭מַרְמְרוּ
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.