OET interlinear NUM 14:8

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-condition-hypothetical

אִם־חָפֵ֥ץ בָּ֨⁠נוּ֙ יְהוָ֔ה וְ⁠הֵבִ֤יא אֹתָ֨⁠נוּ֙ אֶל־הָ⁠אָ֣רֶץ הַ⁠זֹּ֔את

if pleased in,us YHWH and,he_will_bring ,us to/towards the=earth/land (the),this

The author is describing a possible condition in which he will bring us to this land will take place only if Yahweh delights in us occurs first. Express this possible condition in a way that would be natural in your language. Alternate translation: [Suppose that Yahweh delights in us. In that case, he will bring us to this land]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / exclusive

בָּ֨⁠נוּ֙ & אֹתָ֨⁠נוּ֙ & לָ֑⁠נוּ

in,us & ,us & to/for=us

By us, Joshua and Caleb mean to include both themselves and their Israelite listeners, so use the inclusive form of that word if your language marks that distinction.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

הִ֛וא זָבַ֥ת חָלָ֖ב וּ⁠דְבָֽשׁ

who/which flowing_of milk and,honey

Here, Joshua and Caleb are speaking of Canaan as if it were a land that had streams of milk and honey flowing through it. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. See how you translated this clause in 13:27. Alternate translation: [is rich and fertile] or [is very productive]