OET interlinear NUM 2:4

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / hendiadys

וּ⁠צְבָא֖⁠וֹ וּ⁠פְקֻדֵי⁠הֶ֑ם

and,his_military_of,group and,their_enrolled_of,[men]

The phrase his army and their counted ones expresses a single idea. The phrase their counted ones tells more about his army. If it would be more natural in your language, you could express this meaning in a different way. Alternate translation: [as for his army, their counted ones] or [his army of counted ones]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

וּ⁠פְקֻדֵי⁠הֶ֑ם

and,their_enrolled_of,[men]

The pronoun their refers to the army. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [and the army’s counted ones]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

וּ⁠פְקֻדֵי⁠הֶ֑ם

and,their_enrolled_of,[men]

The expression counted ones is a passive verbal form. If your language would not use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. If you need to say who does the action, the context indicates that it is Moses and Aaron with the help of the 12 leaders. Alternate translation: [and those of them whom you and the 12 leaders counted]

Note 4 topic: translate-numbers

אַרְבָּעָ֧ה וְ⁠שִׁבְעִ֛ים אֶ֖לֶף וְ⁠שֵׁ֥שׁ מֵאֽוֹת

four and=seventy thousand and,six hundreds

Translate this number according to the conventions of your own language and culture. See how you translated this number in [1:27](../01/27.md).