OET interlinear NUM 2:9

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

הַ⁠פְּקֻדִ֞ים

the_enrolled,[men]

See how you translated the same use of counted ones in 2:4.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

לְ⁠מַחֲנֵ֣ה יְהוּדָ֗ה

of,the_camp_of Yehuda

See how you translated this phrase in 2:3. Alternate translation: [the camp of Judah, which includes Issachar and Zebulun,]

Note 3 topic: translate-numbers

מְאַ֨ת אֶ֜לֶף וּ⁠שְׁמֹנִ֥ים אֶ֛לֶף וְ⁠שֵֽׁשֶׁת־אֲלָפִ֥ים וְ⁠אַרְבַּע־מֵא֖וֹת

hundred_of thousand and=eighty thousand and,six_of thousands and=four hundreds

See how you translated the large number in 1:46

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

רִאשֹׁנָ֖ה יִסָּֽעוּ

first set_out

The implication is that when the Israelites travel from one location to another, these tribes will begin moving first. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [When traveling to a new location, the camp of Judah will start walking first]

Note 5 topic: translate-ordinal

רִאשֹׁנָ֖ה

first

If your language does not use ordinal numbers, you could use a cardinal number here or an equivalent expression. Alternate translation: [before the other tribes]