OET interlinear REV 1:16

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

καὶ ἔχων

(Some words not found in SR-GNT: καί ἔχων ἐν τῇ δεξιᾷ χειρί αὐτοῦ ἀστέρας ἑπτά καί ἐκ τοῦ στόματος αὐτοῦ ῥομφαία δίστομος ὀξεῖα ἐκπορευομένη καί ἡ ὄψις αὐτοῦ ὡς ὁ ἥλιος φαίνει ἐν τῇ δυνάμει αὐτοῦ)

If it would be helpful to your readers, you could start a new sentence here and indicate the subject of having explicitly. Alternate translation: [This one who was like a son of man had]

Note 2 topic: writing-symlanguage

ἐκ τοῦ στόματος αὐτοῦ & ἐκπορευομένη

out_of the mouth ˱of˲_him & going_out

Be sure it is clear in your translation that this means that the blade of the sword was protruding from his mouth. The sword itself was not in motion. Alternate translation: [protruding from his mouth]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis

ἡ ὄψις αὐτοῦ ὡς ὁ ἥλιος φαίνει

the face ˱of˲_him like the sun ˓is˒_shining

John is leaving out some of the words that in many languages a sentence would need in order to be complete. You can supply these words from the context if that would be clearer in your language. Alternate translation: [his face was shining as the sun shines]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

ἡ ὄψις αὐτοῦ ὡς ὁ ἥλιος φαίνει

the face ˱of˲_him like the sun ˓is˒_shining

The point of this comparison is that the face of this person was shining as brightly as the sun shines. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [his face was shining as brightly as the sun shines]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

ἐν τῇ δυνάμει αὐτοῦ

in the in the power ˱of˲_it

This expression refers to the greatest brightness of the sun, which occurs at noon, when the sun is highest in the sky. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [at its greatest brightness] or [when it is highest in the sky]