InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Num C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31 C32 C33 C34 C35 C36
Num 9 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V17 V18 V19 V20 V21 V22 V23
OET (OET-RV) It remained like that continually—the cloud would cover it during the day, and then at night, it would appear like fire.
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
כֵּ֚ן יִהְיֶ֣ה תָמִ֔יד
yes/correct/thus/so will_belong continuously
The implication is that this situation with the cloud covering the tent in the daytime and appearing as fire at night continued throughout the entire time that the Israelites traveled in the wilderness. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [So it is continually while the Israelites traveled through the wilderness]
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
וּמַרְאֵה־אֵ֖שׁ לָֽיְלָה
and=appearance fire night
By the appearance of fire is at night, the author means that the cloud that covered the sacred tent appeared like fire during the night. You could indicate this explicitly in your translation if that would be helpful to your readers. See how you translated the fuller expression of this idea in 9:15. Alternate translation: [and the cloud appeared like fire at night]
OET (OET-RV) It remained like that continually—the cloud would cover it during the day, and then at night, it would appear like fire.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.