OET interlinear 2 SAM 10:6

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

נִבְאֲשׁ֖וּ בְּ⁠דָוִ֑ד

become_odious (Some words not found in UHB: and=they_saw sons_of ˊAmmōn that/for/because/then/when become_odious with,David and,they_sent sons_of ˊAmmōn and,they_hired DOM ʼArām_of_Beth- house_of ʼArām_of_Beth- and=DOM Tsōⱱāh/(Zobah) Tsōⱱāh/(Zobah) twenty thousand foot_soldiers and=DOM king Maˊₐkāh one_thousand (a)_man and,the_man_of good two ten thousand (a)_man )

The author is speaking as if the Ammonites had made themselves smell so bad that they were offensive to David. He is using this image to mean that the Ammonites had provoked David. Your language may have a comparable image that you could use in your translation. You could also use plain language. If you have already translated the book of 1 Samuel, see how you translated the similar expression in 1 Samuel 13:4. Alternate translation: [they had incensed David] or [they had provoked David]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

אֶת־אֲרַ֨ם בֵּית־רְח֜וֹב וְ⁠אֶת־אֲרַ֣ם צוֹבָ֗א עֶשְׂרִ֥ים אֶ֨לֶף֙ רַגְלִ֔י וְ⁠אֶת־מֶ֤לֶךְ מַֽעֲכָה֙ אֶ֣לֶף אִ֔ישׁ וְ⁠אִ֣ישׁ ט֔וֹב שְׁנֵים־עָשָׂ֥ר אֶ֖לֶף אִֽישׁ

DOM ʼArām_of_Beth- (Some words not found in UHB: and=they_saw sons_of ˊAmmōn that/for/because/then/when become_odious with,David and,they_sent sons_of ˊAmmōn and,they_hired DOM ʼArām_of_Beth- house_of ʼArām_of_Beth- and=DOM Tsōⱱāh/(Zobah) Tsōⱱāh/(Zobah) twenty thousand foot_soldiers and=DOM king Maˊₐkāh one_thousand (a)_man and,the_man_of good two ten thousand (a)_man )

The author is using the names of each of these kingdoms to represent soldiers from those kingdoms. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [20,000 footsoldiers from Aram of Beth-Rehob and Aram of Zoba, 1,000 men of the king of Maacah, and 12,000 men of Tob]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / genericnoun

וְ⁠אִ֣ישׁ ט֔וֹב

and,the_man_of good

The author is not referring to a specific man of Tob. He means men from Tob in general. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could use an expression that would be more natural in your language. Alternate translation: [and men from Tob]